列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question with a simple topic sentence. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember what I need to buy and avoid spending extra money. For example, last week I wrote down all the ingredients for a recipe. Because of the list, I didn't forget anything and saved time.

建議: Your answer is relevant but try to improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' to explain why it works. Also, be more specific about how it helps you organize your day.

範例: Yes, I make a list of tasks for my work every night. I usually write down three important things I need to do the next day. This method works well because it helps me stay focused and manage my time effectively.

建議: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons. Also, clarify your points with specific examples or opinions.

範例: Some people, like my sister, don't like making lists because they feel restricted. For example, she thinks that if she writes down three tasks, she cannot do anything else or be flexible during the day.

建議: Focus on clear and complete sentences. Explain your preference with specific reasons and use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas. Avoid unclear phrases and keep your answer concise.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easier to edit or delete items. For instance, if I change my plans, I can quickly update the list without wasting paper.

× Yes, I do this on my shop.

✓ Yes, I do this when I shop.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and preposition use. 'On my shop' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'when I shop' to indicate the time of the action.

× 'cause give me a.

✓ because it gives me a list.

The phrase is incomplete and unclear. It should be a complete clause explaining the reason, such as 'because it gives me a list'.

× The list that I, I, oh I want.

✓ The list that I want.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive. Simplifying to 'The list that I want' makes it clear and grammatically correct.

× I did not buy anything.

✓ I do not buy anything without it.

The original sentence is in past tense and unclear in context. Since the question is about habitual action, present tense 'do not buy anything without it' is appropriate.

× Anything after that? After that, money my.

✓ Do I buy anything after that? After that, I spend my money wisely.

The original sentences are incomplete and unclear. They need to be rephrased into complete sentences to convey meaning.

× Yes, I make a list of my work.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work.

The correct preposition to indicate purpose is 'for' rather than 'of' in this context.

× H night I write three things that I will I will do tomorrow or next day.

✓ At night, I write three things that I will do tomorrow or the next day.

The original sentence has a typo ('H night') and repetition ('I will I will'). Also, 'next day' should be 'the next day' for clarity.

× And that's worked very well for me because help me to organize my day.

✓ And that works very well for me because it helps me to organize my day.

The original sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly and omits the subject 'it' before 'helps'.

× How well my sister, you know, didn't didn't like do this thing.

✓ Well, my sister, you know, didn't like to do this thing.

The phrase 'How well' is incorrect here; 'Well' is appropriate. Also, 'didn't didn't like do' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't like to do'.

× I think she. She thought that well, these three thing.

✓ I think she thought that, well, these three things.

The original sentence is fragmented and 'thing' should be plural 'things'.

× these three thing.

✓ these three things.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with the plural determiner 'three'.

× She cannot do anything else except the three things, and she cannot do war auction.

✓ She cannot do anything else except the three things, and she cannot do any other tasks.

The phrase 'do war auction' is unclear and likely incorrect. It should be replaced with a clearer phrase like 'do any other tasks'.

× I absolutely prefer to work to do a listing on my.

✓ I absolutely prefer to make a list on my phone.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Prefer to work to do a listing on my' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to make a list on my phone'.

× My phone because for me it's so much easy that help me to delete eliminate anything that I died I don't know also.

✓ My phone because for me it's much easier; it helps me to delete or eliminate anything I don't need.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases like 'that I died I don't know also.' It should be rephrased for clarity and correct grammar.