列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "very important" and "very efficient" together. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, for example, "because" instead of "'cause". Try to correct minor grammar errors such as "shop something" to "go shopping" or "buy something."

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me know exactly what to buy, which saves time and makes the process more efficient.

建議: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases like "come do some task" and "make a work." Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas logically. Also, explain briefly how making a list helps your work to enrich your answer.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and manage my time effectively, which improves my productivity.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words like "because" or "so" to explain reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases such as "using loved block a lot of time."

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and believe it's more productive to start tasks immediately without planning.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is confusing due to unclear sentences and grammar mistakes. Be careful with sentence structure and avoid contradictions (you say you prefer phone but then say you prefer paper). Use linking words like "because" to explain your preference clearly.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, which makes it convenient to check and update my list anytime.

× Yes, of course I will make a list when I go shopping.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list when I go shopping.

The use of 'will' here is unnecessary because the question is about a habitual action, so the simple present tense is appropriate for expressing habits or routines.

× So it is very important for me to make a list before I shop something 'cause I need a very clear target of what I want to buy an it is very efficient as it saves some time for me.

✓ So it is very important for me to make a list before I shop because I need a very clear target of what I want to buy and it is very efficient as it saves some time for me.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'. Also, 'shop something' is incorrect; 'shop' is usually used without an object or with 'for' + object. Here, 'shop' alone is fine. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× So my work is to come do some task and to make some priorities of what I need to work on 1st.

✓ So my work is to come and do some tasks and to set some priorities of what I need to work on first.

'Some task' should be plural 'some tasks' because 'some' quantifies plural countable nouns. Also, 'make some priorities' is better expressed as 'set some priorities'. '1st' should be written as 'first' in formal speech.

× So it is quite essential for me to make a work and it is quite efficient.

✓ So it is quite essential for me to make a plan and it is quite efficient.

'Make a work' is incorrect because 'work' is uncountable here. It should be replaced with a countable noun like 'plan' or 'list' to make sense.

× I think probably they need to figure out what they need to do 1st and this is and this might be.

✓ I think probably they need to figure out what they need to do first, and this might be...

The sentence is incomplete and has redundant phrases 'and this is and this might be'. It should be simplified and completed for clarity.

× Using loved block a lot of time.

✓ Using lists blocks a lot of time.

'Loved' is a typo for 'lists'. Also, 'block a lot of time' should be 'blocks a lot of time' to agree with the singular subject 'using lists'. The preposition 'of' is correct here.

× For some people and they will think that it is not as productive as just doing things without thinking.

✓ For some people, they think that it is not as productive as just doing things without thinking.

The conjunction 'and' is unnecessary here and the sentence is better connected with a comma. Also, 'will think' is changed to 'think' to express a general opinion.

× I would rather prefer to make a list on my phone 'cause I can bring my phone with me everywhere and 24/7.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can bring my phone with me everywhere, 24/7.

'Would rather prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' alone is sufficient. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' in formal speech.

× I'm when I make a list on paper and it should carry the book with me.

✓ When I make a list on paper, I have to carry the notebook with me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I'm when' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× So come for the for the aspects of convenience I would prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ So, because of the aspect of convenience, I would prefer to make a list on my phone.

'Come for the for the aspects' is incorrect and unclear. The phrase should be 'because of the aspect of convenience'. Also, the preference contradicts earlier statements; assuming the intended meaning is phone preference, correction is made accordingly.