列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important. However, sometimes I skip making a list if the shopping is quick or for just a few items, as I find it unnecessary in those cases.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several grammatical mistakes. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

範例: No, I usually don't make lists for my work because I find that it adds to my stress. Instead, I prefer to keep things flexible and handle tasks as they come, which helps me manage my workload better.

建議: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to use varied vocabulary and sentence structures. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

範例: I think some people avoid making lists because they feel it increases their stress or pressure. They prefer to stay flexible and keep their minds free, which helps them work more comfortably without feeling constrained.

建議: Your answer is mostly clear and relevant but has minor grammatical errors and incomplete thoughts at the end. Try to complete your ideas fully and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are concise.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone using a notes app because it's convenient and easy to access anywhere. For example, when I go shopping, I quickly jot down items to avoid forgetting them. However, for important work tasks, I usually don't make lists because I find it stressful and prefer to stay flexible.

× Uh, well, it depend on the.

✓ Uh, well, it depends on the.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular present tense form 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× And the task whenever I go for a shopping at that time definitely I make a list that I do not for get anything.

✓ And depending on the task, whenever I go shopping, I definitely make a list so that I do not forget anything.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. Reordering and adding connecting words improves sentence structure and clarity.

× However, in some cases I do not prefer to make list because I feel more stressed of making list, so that's why.

✓ However, in some cases I do not prefer to make a list because I feel more stressed about making a list, so that's why.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'stressed about' is the correct collocation. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' for countable noun usage.

× To be honest, I do not make less, especially for the work.

✓ To be honest, I do not make lists, especially for work.

'Less' is incorrect here; the plural noun 'lists' is needed. Also, 'for the work' should be 'for work' as a general activity.

× Becauses whenever I go for a walk or work at that time.

✓ Because whenever I go for a walk or work at that time,

The word 'Becauses' is a typo and should be 'Because'. The phrase 'go for a walk or work' is acceptable but needs a comma for sentence continuation.

× Obviously I have work pressure but so I do not want more pressure or stress so that's why I do not make list.

✓ Obviously, I have work pressure, so I do not want more pressure or stress; that's why I do not make a list.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions 'but so' and lacks proper punctuation. Correcting conjunctions and adding punctuation improves clarity.

× In my opinion, some people do not like make list becauses they feel more stressed or tensed whenever they make list.

✓ In my opinion, some people do not like to make lists because they feel more stressed or tense whenever they make lists.

'Like make list' should be 'like to make lists' for correct verb form and plural noun. 'Becauses' is a typo for 'because'. 'Tensed' is incorrect; 'tense' is the correct adjective.

× So to be free, free of mind and to do any work in a flexibility, they do not make list.

✓ So to be free, free in mind, and to do any work with flexibility, they do not make lists.

The phrase 'free of mind' is better as 'free in mind'. 'In a flexibility' is incorrect; 'with flexibility' is correct. Also, 'make list' should be 'make lists'.

× Therefore they do not make list.

✓ Therefore, they do not make lists.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to match the plural subject 'they'.

× To be honest, I prefer to make list on my phone using a notes app because it's convenient and easy to carry around.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to make lists on my phone using a notes app because it's convenient and easy to carry around.

'Make list' should be 'make lists' to indicate plural and correct usage.

× For for example, when I go shopping, I quickly jotted down the items I need so I don't forget anything.

✓ For example, when I go shopping, I quickly jot down the items I need so I don't forget anything.

'For for' is a typo; should be 'For example'. Also, tense consistency requires present tense 'jot' instead of past tense 'jotted'.

× However, for some for more important task at work, I usually don't make list because I find it stressful and prefer to keep.

✓ However, for some more important tasks at work, I usually don't make lists because I find it stressful and prefer to keep.

'For some for more important task' has an extra 'for' and 'task' should be plural 'tasks'. 'Make list' should be 'make lists'.