列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar points. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences for better clarity.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list using an app on my phone. It helps me keep track of groceries I need to buy, like food and small items such as toilet paper or bottled water. This way, I don't forget anything important and can shop efficiently.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to explain your points clearly. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'does work while' and be more specific about how the lists help you.

範例: Yes, I make several lists to manage different projects at work. They help me track my progress and prioritize tasks effectively, ensuring I complete important work on time.

建議: Your answer is fragmented and contains several grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons and avoid unclear phrases like 'word track something on film'.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they trust their memory to remember tasks. Additionally, they may find carrying a paper list inconvenient or prefer not to use digital devices for tracking.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by combining sentences for better flow and using more precise vocabulary. Also, watch for minor grammatical errors and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more portable and convenient. I can carry my phone everywhere and easily modify my lists by dragging items to reprioritize tasks whenever I want.

× Yes, I usually make a list that when I go for groceries, I use an app on my phone to track what are the food I want to buy today, what are the small item I want to restock such as toilet paper or bottled water or some other stuff that I consume regularly.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list. When I go for groceries, I use an app on my phone to track the food I want to buy today, the small items I want to restock such as toilet paper or bottled water, or some other stuff that I consume regularly.

The original sentence is a run-on and has incorrect word order and pluralization. 'What are the food' should be 'the food' and 'what are the small item' should be 'the small items'. Also, the sentence should be split for clarity. The present participle 'making' is not used here, but the sentence structure needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× I used to list is your track my shopping activities.

✓ I used to use a list to track my shopping activities.

The original sentence has incorrect singular/plural forms and word order. 'I used to list is your track' is incorrect. It should be 'I used to use a list to track'. The plural 'list' is singular here, and the verb usage is incorrect.

× Yes, I have a few list to manage different projects or different aspect of my work and it does work while because it helps me to track my progress and I can see the prioritization among different work items.

✓ Yes, I have a few lists to manage different projects or different aspects of my work, and it does work well because it helps me to track my progress and I can see the prioritization among different work items.

'A few list' should be 'a few lists' because 'list' is countable and plural is needed. 'Different aspect' should be 'different aspects' for the same reason. Also, 'while' is incorrect here and should be 'well'.

× Some people don't like making listed because they trust their own memory.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they trust their own memory.

'Making listed' is incorrect; the correct noun form is 'lists'. 'Listed' is an adjective or past participle, not a noun here.

× To memorize enough information about a lot of things.

✓ To memorize enough information about a lot of things.

This is a sentence fragment without a main verb; it should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased. However, no preposition error is present here, so no correction needed for preposition.

× Also they might think carrying a paper list of word track something on film is to unconvenient.

✓ Also, they might think carrying a paper list or writing something on film is too inconvenient.

'Word track something on film' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; 'writing something on film' is a possible correction. 'To unconvenient' should be 'too inconvenient' as 'too' is the correct adverb here.

× So they do not like lists.

✓ So they do not like lists.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more portable.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more portable.

'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' and is acceptable in spoken English; no correction needed here.

× I just need to carry my phone anywhere I go.

✓ I just need to carry my phone wherever I go.

'Anywhere I go' is understandable but 'wherever I go' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× Also it allows me to easily modify my list because the UI on my cellphone allows me to drag the items on the list easily so I can re prioritize my work items anything I want, anytime I want.

✓ Also, it allows me to easily modify my list because the UI on my cellphone allows me to drag the items on the list easily, so I can reprioritize my work items anytime I want.

'Re prioritize' should be one word 'reprioritize'. The phrase 'anything I want' is unnecessary and confusing here and should be removed. Commas are added for clarity.