列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan hindari kata-kata yang tidak jelas atau terputus. Misalnya, jelaskan manfaat membuat daftar dengan kalimat yang terstruktur dengan baik.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and remember everything I need to buy.

建議: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan jelaskan alasan mengapa daftar kadang berhasil dan kadang tidak. Hindari kata-kata yang tidak jelas dan gunakan linking words untuk koherensi.

範例: Yes, I sometimes make a list for my work. It works well when I follow it carefully, but sometimes I forget to check it, so it doesn't help much.

建議: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur. Jelaskan alasan dengan kalimat lengkap dan gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan alami.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and decide what to buy directly at the shop.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat lengkap. Jelaskan alasan preferensi dengan kalimat yang jelas dan koheren menggunakan linking words.

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper because it is easier to see and handle, and I find it simple and convenient.

× It's makes me more. Organize an.

✓ It helps me organize more.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'It's makes' which is a combination of 'it is' and 'makes'. The correct form is 'It helps me organize more.' because 'helps' is the correct verb here and 'organize' should be in base form after 'helps'. Also, 'an' is unnecessary and 'more' should be connected to 'organize'.

× I usually make a list before I go to shopping Ann.

✓ I usually make a list before I go shopping, Ann.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, a comma is needed before the name 'Ann' as it is a direct address.

× Because. Maybe. When I get. All. The lease. Aye. Berkeley League.

✓ Because maybe when I get all the least, I barely leave.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It seems the student tried to say 'Because maybe when I get all the least, I barely leave.' but the sentence is still unclear. Possibly, the student meant 'Because maybe when I get all the list, I barely leave.' which would mean 'Because maybe when I get all the list, I barely leave.' However, the sentence needs clarification. The correction attempts to make it a complete sentence but the meaning is ambiguous.

× They want to or. Spontaneous or just? One to buy. Anne. Direct Direct at shop.

✓ They want to be spontaneous or just want to buy and go directly to the shop.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a coherent sentence that likely reflects the intended meaning: 'They want to be spontaneous or just want to buy and go directly to the shop.'

× I prefer to make a list on paper. Because it's more easy to see it. An I. Can handle with. Easy and simple.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it's easier to see. I can handle it easily and simply.

The phrase 'more easy' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'easier'. 'An I' is incorrect and should be 'I'. 'Can handle with' is incorrect; the correct form is 'can handle it'. 'Easy and simple' should be changed to adverbs 'easily and simply' to modify the verb 'handle'.