列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and keep it concise. Instead of saying 'helps me remember what to buy and as a result it saves me a lot of time by preventing unnecessary wondering', you can combine these ideas more naturally. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what to buy and thus saves time by preventing unnecessary wandering in the store.

建議: Good structure and clear answer. To improve, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, such as 'but' instead of 'however' at the start of the sentence, and add a comma before 'which'. Also, try to be more specific about how the list helps you focus.

範例: I don't usually make a list for household chores, but I always make one when I study because it helps me choose topics and stay organized, which in turn improves my concentration.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains a grammatical error ('preferred' should be 'prefer'). Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and link your ideas better. For example, use 'therefore' or 'as a result' to connect reasons and consequences.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious. Furthermore, since lists remind them of their responsibilities, they often prefer to avoid making them.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding awkward phrases like 'or obtainable'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Try to be more specific about when you prefer each method.

範例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I write lists on paper if it's handy, but usually I use my phone because it's always with me and very convenient.

× so they preferred not to make them.

✓ so they prefer not to make them.

The sentence is discussing a general opinion about why some people dislike making lists, which is a present tense context. Using 'preferred' (past tense) is incorrect here; it should be 'prefer' to match the present tense context.