列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意语法和连贯性。可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget what to buy. This helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss any items.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议使用更准确的时态和结构，并简洁表达观点。

範例: No, I don't usually make a list for work because my job requires me to focus on one task at a time. I only start a new task after finishing the current one.

建議: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，建议用完整句子表达原因，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it doesn't help them stay organized. For example, artists might prefer to work spontaneously rather than following a strict list.

建議: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，建议使用完整句子并清晰表达观点，同时避免重复。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. In contrast, paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten.

× I'm not good at remember what to buy

✓ I'm not good at remembering what to buy

动词短语 'good at' 后面应接动名词形式，不能用动词原形。这里应使用 'remembering' 而非 'remember'。

× before I go to shop

✓ before I go shopping

动词 'go' 后接表示活动的动名词形式，表示去做某事，故应使用 'go shopping' 而非 'go to shop'。

× Lose things what I want to buy

✓ lose the things that I want to buy

关系代词使用错误，'what' 用于表示 'the thing(s) which'，但此处应使用关系代词 'that' 来引导定语从句修饰 'things'。

× My works requires the people focus on the only one job on your hand

✓ My work requires people to focus on only one job in their hands

'work' 作为不可数名词不加复数，'requires' 主语为单数 'work'，'people' 不加定冠词，'focus on only one job' 结构调整，'your hand' 应改为复数 'their hands' 以匹配 'people'。

× So I don't need to list what I need to do next

✓ So I don't need to make a list of what I need to do next

动词 'list' 用法不当，应使用固定搭配 'make a list'，且后面接 'of what I need to do next' 更符合表达习惯。

× the people don't like making list

✓ people don't like making lists

'people' 是复数，'list' 应使用复数形式 'lists'。

× if you. Are an artist, so I don't think you should make a list

✓ if you are an artist, I don't think you should make a list

条件句中不应使用连词 'so'，应直接连接两个句子。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I will take my phone and where

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I will take my phone everywhere

'where' 用法错误，应为副词 'everywhere' 表示 '到处'。

× if you rush down your list on the paper, you may be lost. Lost them somewhere

✓ if you write down your list on paper, you may lose it somewhere

'rush down' 用法错误，应为 'write down'；'lost' 用作形容词或动词过去式，此处应使用动词 'lose'；'them' 指代不明，列表应为单数 'it'。