列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping to avoid forgetting important items. For example, I write down everything I need on my phone, which helps me stay organised and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific details using linking words. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and coherent.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organised and focused. For instance, I use digital apps that remind me of my tasks, which improves my productivity and gives me a sense of accomplishment.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons using linking words.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and not feel restricted. They enjoy doing activities freely without planning everything in advance.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is hard to understand due to grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific details using linking words. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, which is more convenient. Additionally, I can easily add or remove items and share my list with friends, which helps me stay organised.

× Yes, alright. Make a list when I'm sharp to ensure I don't forget anything important and it's helped me too.

✓ Yes, alright. I make a list when I'm sharp to ensure I don't forget anything important and it helps me too.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the imperative 'Make a list' instead of the present simple 'I make a list'. Also, 'it's helped me too' is in the present perfect tense, which is inconsistent with the present simple context. Changing to 'it helps me too' maintains tense consistency and clarity.

× And sure what I need to buy it and.

✓ And I'm sure about what I need to buy.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'And sure what I need to buy it and.' lacks a subject and proper verb structure. Correcting it to 'And I'm sure about what I need to buy.' provides a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× Avoid impressed buying rice so I usually write it down on my phone.

✓ To avoid impulsive buying, I usually write it down on my phone.

The phrase 'Avoid impressed buying rice' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely to avoid 'impulsive buying'. Also, 'impressed' is incorrect here. Using 'To avoid impulsive buying' correctly expresses the purpose. 'Write it down on my phone' is correct.

× Yes, I definitely make at least for my word and it's helped me today's overnight and focus on my class.

✓ Yes, I definitely make at least one for my work and it has helped me stay organized and focus on my class today.

The phrase 'make at least for my word' is unclear and likely meant to be 'make at least one for my work'. 'Today's overnight' is incorrect; 'stay organized' or 'stay focused' fits better. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects singular/plural and tense issues.

× So I use digital apps to keep track of my work list, which remains me about my task and I find that the professionally increase from my following list and I feel a sense of camp camp. Richmond.

✓ So I use digital apps to keep track of my work list, which reminds me about my tasks, and I find that my productivity increases from following my list, and I feel a sense of accomplishment.

'Remains me' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'reminds me'. 'Professionally increase' is incorrect; likely meant 'productivity increases'. 'Camp camp. Richmond.' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; replaced with 'a sense of accomplishment' to fit context.

× So some people like to be fixed mode and they don't want to be tried to run Barleys and they just want sure.

✓ So some people like to be in a fixed mode and they don't want to be tied down by rules, and they just want to be sure.

'Fixed mode' needs the preposition 'in'. 'Tried to run Barleys' is incorrect; likely meant 'tied down by rules'. 'Just want sure' is incomplete; corrected to 'just want to be sure' for clarity.

× Enjoy doing fantastic things which make them feel freedom.

✓ They enjoy doing fantastic things which make them feel free.

'Feel freedom' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel free'. Also, adding 'They' at the beginning clarifies the subject.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always with me making more convenience, so I can easily added an range, a jump on the digital ways and there asked you help me organized marries better.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always with me, making it more convenient, so I can easily add and arrange items, jump on digital ways, and they also help me organise matters better.

'Making more convenience' should be 'making it more convenient'. 'Added an range' should be 'add and arrange'. 'There asked you help me organized marries better' is unclear; corrected to 'they also help me organise matters better'. The sentence needed corrections in prepositions, verb forms, and clarity.

× So additionally I can try my list with my friend if daddy.

✓ Additionally, I can share my list with my friends if needed.

'Try my list with my friend if daddy' is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely intended 'share my list with my friends if needed'. Corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.