列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が断片的で文法的に不完全です。自然な英語で、質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、文をつなげる接続詞を使い、意味が通る文章を作ることが重要です。

範例: Yes, I always make a list before going to the supermarket because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で、文が途切れ途切れです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や効果を説明する文を作る練習をしましょう。接続詞を使い、文をつなげることが大切です。

範例: Yes, I try to make a list before starting my work, and it definitely helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

建議: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を述べる際は、主語と動詞を正しく使い、文をつなげて説明する練習をしましょう。

範例: I think it depends on their personality and situation. Some people avoid making lists because they feel rushed or stressed when doing so.

建議: 文が断片的で、理由の説明が不十分です。理由を明確に述べ、文をつなげて自然な回答を作る練習をしましょう。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because writing tasks with a pen helps me remember them better and for a longer time.

× Yes, I make a list before. Going to supermarket. Because. If I. Done right down. Any information? Would I want to buy? I end up using.

✓ Yes, I make a list before going to the supermarket because if I don't write down any information about what I want to buy, I end up forgetting.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. Combining the fragments into complete sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I make a list before. Going to supermarket.

✓ Yes, I make a list before going to the supermarket.

The preposition 'to' is necessary before 'the supermarket' to indicate direction or destination.

× If I. Done right down. Any information? Would I want to buy?

✓ If I don't write down any information about what I want to buy,

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verb forms. 'I' should be followed by a verb in the correct tense and form to make sense.

× Yes. I tried to make a list. Before. Doing my job. Anne. It's definitely. Work. Working. In. If I make this.

✓ Yes, I try to make a list before doing my job. It definitely works if I do this.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining fragments into coherent sentences improves understanding and grammatical correctness.

× Anne. It's definitely. Work. Working. In.

✓ It definitely works.

The original sentence contains unclear pronoun usage and unnecessary words. Simplifying to 'It definitely works' is correct.

× Because I think. Is depends on their personal and situations.

✓ Because I think it depends on their personal situations.

The sentence incorrectly omits the subject 'it' and misuses 'and' instead of combining adjectives and nouns properly.

× And if they are, hurry or. To feel stressful to make list they avoid to make.

✓ And if they are in a hurry or feel stressed about making a list, they avoid making one.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and verb forms. Correct prepositions and verb forms are necessary for clarity.

× I like making a list on a paper rather than using my phone.

✓ I like making a list on paper rather than using my phone.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'paper' when referring to the material in general.

× Because if I. Use pencil or pen to write down the task.

✓ Because if I use a pencil or pen to write down the tasks,

The sentence lacks articles before 'pencil' and 'pen' and should pluralize 'task' to match context.

× I can keep in my mind to do an it takes long.

✓ I can keep it in my mind to do, and it takes longer.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure and word choice improve clarity.