列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items. Therefore, I write reminders on my phone to ensure I don't miss anything when I go to the supermarket.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on giving a direct response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details using linking words. Keep your sentences concise and relevant.

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work. This helps me prioritise tasks and complete them efficiently within the day.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear vocabulary and sentence structure. Try to express your ideas clearly with appropriate vocabulary and provide specific reasons using linking words.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful or feel it restricts their freedom. Others may prefer a more spontaneous approach to organising their tasks.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, followed by specific reasons using linking words to make your answer coherent and concise.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient. Additionally, I can set alarms to remind me of important tasks, which helps me stay organised.

× Yes for sure is is an organized square for me too.

✓ Yes, for sure, it is an organised way for me too.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and clarity. 'Is is an organized square' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence adds necessary punctuation and replaces 'square' with 'way' to make sense in context.

× White water little by becauses I don't trust my memory, I always forgot something.

✓ With a little help because I don't trust my memory, I always forget something.

The original sentence uses incorrect words and conjunctions ('White water little by becauses'). The correction uses 'With a little help because' to connect ideas properly and changes 'forgot' to 'forget' to match present tense.

× I always forgot something.

✓ I always forget something.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate.

× So it is quite important for me to write that on the e-mail reminder on my phone and to remain.

✓ So it is quite important for me to write that on the e-mail reminder on my phone and to remember.

The word 'remain' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'remember'. This is a misuse of verb choice, which affects clarity.

× But will I need to buy on from the supermarket?

✓ But will I need to buy it from the supermarket?

The sentence is missing the object pronoun 'it' and has an extra preposition 'on'. Correcting these improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Before. Starting my work, I always wait To Do List.

✓ Before starting my work, I always check my To Do List.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Wait To Do List' is incorrect; 'check my To Do List' is a proper phrase to express the intended meaning.

× To wait I will I need to finish today's also power times the task.

✓ I will finish today's tasks on time.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect quantifiers and phrases. The correction simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning.

× Is this a productive and also efficient way for me to to finish my work on time and also to be more?

✓ This is a productive and efficient way for me to finish my work on time and be more effective.

The original sentence is a question but context suggests a statement. Also, 'to to' is a typo. The correction clarifies the sentence structure and meaning.

× I will say for some people they are not good at white hang this they will feel mess or Jordan mince and when they need to be make babies for their lives.

✓ I would say some people are not good at writing things down; they feel messy or disorganised when they need to make plans for their lives.

The original sentence contains many incorrect words and pronouns ('white hang this', 'Jordan mince', 'make babies'). The correction replaces these with appropriate words to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× So it may depend. Some people may Super Bowl on this way but others may not.

✓ So it may depend. Some people may support this way, but others may not.

'Super Bowl' is incorrectly used; likely intended 'support'. Also, a comma before 'but' is added for correct conjunction usage.

× Personally, I do make a this Oh my phone is a convenient way for me to type my.

✓ Personally, I do make lists on my phone; it is a convenient way for me to type my tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and articles ('a this Oh'). The correction clarifies the sentence and corrects pronoun usage.

× Type the to do these on my phone.

✓ I type the to-do tasks on my phone.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× We might that and and to set the alarm to remind me which identifies or with ready to do so during this time.

✓ I might set an alarm to remind me which tasks are ready to do during this time.

The original sentence is incoherent with repeated words and unclear phrases. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness.