耐心— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific brief examples using linking words. Also correct word choice (public transport, go). Keep to 3–4 sentences max.

範例: No, I'm not a very patient person. For example, during the morning rush, I often have to wait in long queues for public transport, and I'm worried I might miss the bus. Because of that, I feel anxious and impatient when I'm running late.

建議: Begin with a direct topic sentence explaining the cause, then add a specific example with linking words and correct tense and phrasing. Avoid sentence fragments and incomplete endings.

範例: I become impatient when I feel I won't complete an important task on time. For instance, once I was traveling to a job interview and, although I planned my journey, a huge traffic jam made me anxious because I might arrive late.

建議: State your feeling first, then explain why with specific details. Use correct verbs and nouns (grow, experiment), past tense consistency, and avoid filler words. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

範例: I get bored quickly because long repetitive tasks don't help me grow. For example, last month I worked eight hours on a lab experiment; although I finished it, I lost interest halfway through because the work was repetitive.

建議: Answer directly, then give a concise, specific example with correct vocabulary (chemist, laboratory, experiment) and tense. Use linking words to connect reason and example.

範例: Yes. As a chemist in a laboratory, my job often requires patience because experiments can take a long time. For example, last month I ran an experiment that lasted several hours and I had to monitor it carefully throughout.

建議: Give a clear comparison: state the change, explain reasons with one or two specific details, use correct verb forms (grown, looked) and avoid fillers. Keep it concise and coherent with linking words (because, whereas).

範例: Yes, I'm more patient now than when I was a child because I've learned to accept routine tasks. As a child I constantly looked for fun activities, whereas now I understand that boredom can be part of learning and growth.

× No, I don't think I'm a very patient person because especially during the morning rush where I have to catch the bus and gone to the public transportation and there will be always a long queue waiting for the bus or public transport transportation.

✓ No, I don't think I'm a very patient person, because especially during the morning rush when I have to catch the bus and go to public transportation, there is always a long queue waiting for the bus or other transport.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'gone' instead of 'go' and incorrect use of 'there will be always' and redundant noun 'public transport transportation'. Reason: Use simple present for habitual actions (I go, there is) and correct word order: 'there is always' not 'there will be always'. Suggestion: Use 'when' for time clauses, 'go to public transportation' and 'there is always a long queue'.

× And I was very nervous that I could miss the bus.

✓ And I was very nervous that I might miss the bus.

Error: modal/past possibility use. 'Could' here is awkward for a past possibility; 'might' better expresses the past fear of possibility. Suggestion: Use 'was nervous that I might miss' to express a past concern about a possible event.

× And miss the bus.

✓ I was worried about missing the bus.

Error: sentence fragment without subject and verb; repetition. Reason: Fragment lacks a full clause. Suggestion: Combine with previous sentence or make a full clause: 'I was worried about missing the bus.'

× The feeling of not getting my duty is done on time.

✓ The feeling of not getting my duties done on time makes me impatient.

Errors: incorrect passive/tense and noun form. 'Not getting my duty is done' mixes structures. Use 'getting my duties done' (gerund) and make it the subject of 'makes me impatient' to state cause and effect. Suggestion: Use 'duties' (plural) if referring to tasks and 'getting ... done' for completion.

× For example, there was one time that I have to attend a job interview and although that I calculated that I could make it on time after I get onto the bus, however, there was a huge traffic jam.

✓ For example, there was one time when I had to attend a job interview and, although I had calculated that I could make it on time after I got on the bus, there was a huge traffic jam.

Errors: mixed tenses and wrong conjunctions: 'have to' should be past 'had to'; 'although that I calculated' should be 'although I had calculated'; 'get onto the bus' should be past 'got on the bus'; redundant 'however' with 'although'. Suggestion: Keep past tense consistent for a past event and use 'when' for time clauses.

× I was very anxious about the.

✓ I was very anxious about that.

Error: sentence fragment with missing object. 'about the' is incomplete. Suggestion: Use a complete phrase such as 'about that' or 'about missing the interview.'

× I will get bored very easily because it's, uh, doesn't allow me to growth as a person.

✓ I get bored very easily because it doesn't allow me to grow as a person.

Errors: tense/modal mismatch and wrong verb form 'growth' (noun) used instead of verb 'grow'; 'I will get' is inconsistent with general statement — use present simple 'I get'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual feelings and the verb 'grow'.

× I remember I work in a laboratory, uh, last month I have to do, uh, a chemical experience for 8 hours straight.

✓ I remember I worked in a laboratory; last month I had to do a chemical experiment for 8 hours straight.

Errors: tense inconsistency: 'I remember I work' should be past 'I worked'; 'have to' should be past 'had to'; 'chemical experience' is incorrect word choice for 'experiment'. Suggestion: Use past tense to describe past events and use 'experiment' for lab work.

× And although that I completed my duty, I was, uh, not interested what on what I'm doing.

✓ Although I completed my duties, I was not interested in what I was doing.

Errors: awkward 'although that I' and wrong preposition 'interested what on what' and tense mismatch 'I'm doing' should be past 'I was doing'. Suggestion: Use 'Although I completed my duties' and 'interested in what I was doing.'

× Yes, as a chemist in a chemical laboratory, I have to be very patient on my duty.

✓ Yes, as a chemist in a chemical laboratory, I have to be very patient in my duties.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'on my duty' and singular 'duty' awkward — use 'in my duties' or 'with my work'. Suggestion: Use 'in' with 'duties' or say 'patient in my work.'

× For example, last month I have to work for a chemical experience that requires for prolonged period of time, so I have to be patient.

✓ For example, last month I had to work on a chemical experiment that required a prolonged period of time, so I had to be patient.

Errors: tense inconsistency (have to -> had to), wrong noun 'experience' should be 'experiment', unnecessary 'for' after 'requires', and article missing 'a prolonged period'. Suggestion: Use past tense throughout for past events and 'work on an experiment that required a prolonged period.'

× Yes, I think I definitely grow from my past experience.

✓ Yes, I think I have definitely grown from my past experiences.

Errors: wrong tense 'grow' should be present perfect 'have grown' to show change over time; 'experience' likely plural. Suggestion: Use present perfect to link past experiences to present condition and pluralize if multiple experiences.

× When I was a child I always umm, looking for something interesting to play with, uh, like toys and playing with my friends.

✓ When I was a child I was always looking for something interesting to play with, like toys, and I liked playing with my friends.

Errors: missing 'was' for past continuous 'was always looking' and inconsistent structure 'like toys and playing with my friends' — make parallel clauses. Suggestion: Use past continuous for habitual past actions and parallel structure for list items.

× But now I have learned that uh, being bored is a part of the process.

✓ But now I have learned that being bored is part of the process.

Minor issue: unnecessary 'uh' and extra article 'a part' is acceptable but 'part of the process' is more natural. Suggestion: Remove fillers and use 'is part of the process.'