写作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“read a lot of dissertation”应为“write a lot of dissertations”。建议注意动词的正确使用，并简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I write a lot during my university studies. For example, I often have to write dissertations and assignments for courses like financial markets and other basic subjects.

建議: 回答中时态不一致，如“gave me a sense of pride”应为“gives me a sense of pride”。建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I like to write assignments and dissertations in the library because I can focus better there. Also, I can find charts and tables to include, which gives me a sense of pride and boosts my confidence.

建議: 回答中出现了语义错误，如“things I read”应为“things I write”，且语法错误较多。建议加强语法基础，注意主谓一致和词汇准确性。

範例: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time. For example, when I was younger, I usually wrote short journals, but now I prefer writing assignments.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“sounds place between the paper and the pen”不自然。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意冠词使用。

範例: I prefer handwriting when writing dissertations or assignments because I enjoy the feeling of the pen on paper. It makes me feel more confident and proud of my work.

× Yes, of course I read a lot of dissertation in my university.

✓ Yes, of course I read a lot of dissertations in my university.

dissertation 是可数名词，表示论文，复数形式应为 dissertations。这里表示很多论文，应使用复数形式。

× I have some program like financial market or some basic subject.

✓ I have some programs like financial market or some basic subjects.

program 和 subject 都是可数名词，表示课程或项目，复数形式应为 programs 和 subjects。这里表示多个课程，应使用复数形式。

× I have to write some dissertation or assignments that require us to write a lot of words in my computer.

✓ I have to write some dissertations or assignments that require us to write a lot of words on my computer.

dissertation 应使用复数 dissertations，且介词应为 on my computer 而非 in my computer。

× Well, I like to write some assignments or dissertation in the library.

✓ Well, I like to write some assignments or dissertations in the library.

dissertation 应使用复数 dissertations，表示多篇论文。

× I like to write some assignments or dissertation in the library.

✓ I like to write some assignments or dissertations in the library.

in the library 表示在图书馆内，使用正确，无需修改。此处无介词错误。

× That boosts my confidence and gave me a sense of pride.

✓ That boosts my confidence and gives me a sense of pride.

前半句用现在时 boosts，后半句用过去时 gave，时态不一致，应统一为现在时。

× I think the things I read would definitely change.

✓ I think the things I write would definitely change.

根据上下文，应该是写作内容会改变，原句中 read 应改为 write。

× That is because everyone have different writing styles in different times.

✓ That is because everyone has different writing styles at different times.

everyone 是单数，谓语动词应使用 has 而非 have。

× That is because everyone have different writing styles in different times.

✓ That is because everyone has different writing styles at different times.

表示“在不同的时间”，应使用介词 at 而非 in。

× in my young age I generally wrote some short journals, but in a later age I prefer to write some assignments.

✓ in my young age I generally wrote some short journals, but at a later age I prefer to write some assignments.

表示“在较晚的年龄”，应使用介词 at 而非 in。

× Well, I prefer handwriting when I am writing an dissertation or an assignment.

✓ Well, I prefer handwriting when I am writing a dissertation or an assignment.

dissertation 以辅音音素开头，冠词应为 a 而非 an。

× That is because I love the sounds place between the paper and the pen.

✓ That is because I love the sound made between the paper and the pen.

原句表达不清，改为 love the sound made between the paper and the pen 更符合英语表达习惯。

× For example, if I write something on the paper, I would definitely enjoy the sense of confidence and pride.

✓ For example, if I write something on the paper, I would definitely enjoy the sense of confidence and pride.

该句无明显语法错误，保持不变。