7 分范例

问题: Are most people patient while waiting?

思路 1

Yes
有耐心
考官答案
In the past, I think people didn't have much patience for waiting because they had nothing to do during unexpected delays. But now, it's different. When a train is canceled or a bus is late, we can use our phones and go online. For business people, they can easily check their emails or even join a meeting online. There are so many options. I believe the need for patience in these situations has disappeared.
过去,我认为人们在等待时没有太多耐心,因为在意外延误时他们没事可做。但现在不同了。当火车取消或公交车晚点时,我们可以使用手机上网。对商务人士来说,他们可以轻松地查看电子邮件,甚至在线参加会议。选择很多。我相信,在这些情况下对耐心的需求已经消失了。
In the past, I don't think people were. They had nothing to do if they suddenly had to wait for something unexpected. These days though, it's a different story. If a train is canceled or a bus is delayed, we can use our phones and access the internet. If it's a businessperson, there's nothing to stop them from checking their emails on their phone or even attending a meeting online. The possibilities are endless. The idea of having to be patient in these situations has gone in my opinion.
过去,我认为人们没有耐心等待。如果他们突然不得不等待一些意想不到的事情,他们就无事可做了。但如今,情况不同了。如果火车取消或公共汽车延误,我们可以用手机上网。如果是商务人士,他们可以用手机查看电子邮件,甚至参加在线会议。可能性是无限的。在我看来,在这种情况下必须耐心等待的想法已经一去不复返了。
语法分析
过去时态与现在时态对比:"In the past, I don't think people were" 与 "These days though, it's a different story" 的对比使用了过去时态和现在时态,说明了过去与现在的差异,增加了句子的时态复杂性。 条件状语从句:"If a train is canceled or a bus is delayed" 设置了一个假设的情境,说明在特定条件下可能采取的行动,增强了语句的实际应用性。 名词短语作主语:"The idea of having to be patient in these situations" 作为主语,增加了句子的深度和复杂性,展示了抽象概念的表达能力。 现在分词作状语:"checking their emails on their phone or even attending a meeting online" 中的 "checking" 和 "attending" 作为现在分词状语,说明了在特定情况下可能进行的多种活动,使句子更加生动和具体。
高分词汇
  • unexpected
    意外的
  • access the internet
    访问互联网
  • businessperson
    商人
  • attend a meeting online
    参加在线会议
  • endless
    无尽的
  • the idea of
    ……的观念

思路 2

No
没耐心
考官答案
Most people today just aren't patient when it comes to waiting. Everyone's so busy with their lives, so being stuck waiting is really annoying. Plus, I've noticed that a lot of people just can't stand being idle and they hate waiting around for anything.
现在大多数人在等待时都没有耐心。每个人都忙于自己的生活,所以被迫等待真的很烦人。此外,我注意到很多人无法忍受闲置状态,他们讨厌等待任何事情。
In today's fast-paced world, patience seems to be a rarity, especially when it involves waiting. The majority of people are engrossed in their hectic schedules, making any form of delay a source of frustration. It's evident that the general sentiment leans towards a dislike for waiting, as it disrupts the flow of their daily routines.
在当今快节奏的世界里,尤其是在涉及等待时,耐心似乎是一种稀缺品。大多数人都全神贯注于他们繁忙的日程,任何形式的延误都成为挫败感的来源。显然,普遍的情绪倾向于不喜欢等待,因为它打乱了他们的日常生活节奏。
语法分析
现在分词作定语:"engrossed in their hectic schedules" 中的现在分词“engrossed”作为定语,描述人们的状态,增加了句子的描述性和深度。 主动语态和被动语态的混合使用:在整个句子中,既有主动语态(如“people are engrossed”)也有被动语态(如“patience seems to be a rarity”),这种混合使用显示了较高的语法灵活性。 名词作主语:"the general sentiment" 作为主语,是一个抽象的概念,使得句子更加深入和有思想性。
高分词汇
  • fast-paced
    快节奏
  • engrossed
    全神贯注
  • hectic
    繁忙
  • delay
    延误
  • sentiment
    情绪
  • disrupt
    打乱
  • flow
    流程