7 分范例

问题: Do you think there is too much advertising in our daily lives?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Absolutely, ads are everywhere in our lives now. Whenever we go online, we can't avoid them. There are pop-up ads and every website has them. TV commercials seem longer as channels try to show as many as they can. Even the trains are covered in ads. It's overwhelming, but I think we've started to ignore them because we see them so much. They don't really affect us much anymore.
绝对是的,现在广告无处不在。每当我们上网时,就无法避免遇到它们。到处都是弹出式广告,每个网站都有广告。电视广告似乎变得更长了,因为电视频道试图播放尽可能多的广告。甚至火车上也布满了广告。这非常令人难以置信,但我认为我们开始忽视它们,因为我们看到它们太多了。它们现在对我们的影响并不大。
My goodness yes. It's permeated every part of our life today. If we go online, it's impossible to avoid it. Pop-up ads appear and every website has ads attached to it. The TV ad breaks are longer than ever as TV companies try to get as many ads in as possible and even the train I take to work is covered in them. It's incredible and we just can't escape them. However, what I think has happened is that we have become desensitized to them. As we see them everywhere now, they don't have much of an effect on us.
我的天哪,是的。如今,它已经渗透到我们生活的方方面面。如果我们上网,就无法避免它。弹出式广告不断出现,每个网站都附带有广告。电视广告时间比以往任何时候都要长,因为电视公司想方设法让广告尽可能多地出现在电视上,就连我上班乘坐的火车上也布满了广告。这太不可思议了,我们根本无法摆脱它们。然而,我认为现在的情况是,我们对这些广告已经变得麻木不仁。由于我们现在随处可见这些广告,它们对我们的影响并不大。
语法分析
现在完成进行时:"It's permeated every part of our life today" 中使用了现在完成进行时态,表示广告渗透到生活中的这个动作从过去开始并持续到现在,体现了时间性的连续性和深度。 强调句型:"It's incredible and we just can't escape them" 这句中使用了强调结构,强调了广告无处不在的事实,增加了表达的强度。 条件状语从句:"As we see them everywhere now, they don't have much of an effect on us" 中的"as"引导的条件状语从句,表达了因果关系,说明了广告无处不在导致的结果。 反身代词的使用:"we have become desensitized to them" 这句中使用了反身代词“desensitized”,表现了对广告的主观感受,增加了语句的深度和个性化表达。
高分词汇
  • goodness
    天啊
  • permeate
    渗透
  • online
    在线
  • Pop-up ads
    弹出式广告
  • TV ad breaks
    电视广告间隔
  • train
    火车
  • incredible
    难以置信的
  • escape
    逃避
  • desensitized
    麻木的
  • effect on us
    对我们的影响

思路 2

No
不是
考官答案
I don't think there's too much advertising. If we don't want to see it, we can usually avoid it or ignore it. Also, ads are a way for companies to make money, so they're kind of necessary. Plus, with today's technology, we often have the option to skip or block ads, especially online. And really, some ads can be informative or entertaining, adding value to our day.
我不认为有太多的广告。如果我们不想看,我们通常可以避免或忽视它。此外,广告是公司赚钱的一种方式,所以它们在某种程度上是必要的。另外,有了现今的技术,我们经常有选择跳过或屏蔽广告的选项,尤其是在网上。而且,事实上,一些广告可能是有信息性或娱乐性的,增加了我们一天的价值。
I believe the amount of advertising in our lives isn't excessive. We have the choice to avoid or ignore it when we prefer not to engage. Besides, advertising is a fundamental aspect of how companies generate revenue, making it an essential part of the business ecosystem. Modern tools like ad blockers and subscription services offer us control over what we see. Moreover, a well-crafted advertisement can be quite engaging and sometimes even provide useful information or entertainment.
我认为我们生活中的广告量并不过多。当我们不想关注时,我们可以选择避免或忽略它。此外,广告是公司创收的一个基本方面,是商业生态系统的重要组成部分。像广告拦截器和订阅服务这样的现代工具为我们控制我们所看到的内容提供了可能。此外,一个制作精良的广告可能相当吸引人,有时甚至提供有用的信息或娱乐。
语法分析
条件状语从句: "when we prefer not to engage" 作为条件状语从句,说明了在不想参与的情况下我们的选择,展示了条件句的使用。 分词结构作定语: "well-crafted advertisement" 中的 "well-crafted" 作为过去分词短语,用作定语修饰广告,增加了句子的描述性和复杂性。 名词短语作主语: "Modern tools like ad blockers and subscription services" 作为名词短语,在句子中作主语,描述了现代工具如何提供我们对所看内容的控制,体现了名词短语的复杂运用。
高分词汇
  • excessive
    过多的
  • avoid or ignore
    避免或忽略
  • prefer not to engage
    不愿参与
  • fundamental aspect
    核心方面
  • generate revenue
    产生收入
  • essential part
    重要部分
  • ecosystem
    生态系统
  • ad blockers
    广告拦截器
  • subscription services
    订阅服务
  • well-crafted advertisement
    精心制作的广告
  • engaging
    吸引人的
  • useful information
    有用的信息