7 分范例

问题: Do people have fewer holidays now than in the past?

思路 1

Yes
比以前少
考官答案
Yeah, I think people definitely have fewer holidays now. It's quite common to see folks working on weekends or even having a six-day work week. This leaves little time for holidays. I guess with all the work pressure and tight schedules, taking time off has become a luxury for many.
是的,我认为人们现在的假期确实比以前少。经常可以看到人们在周末工作,甚至每周工作六天。这让他们几乎没有时间休假。我想随着工作压力和紧张的时间表,对许多人来说,休假已经成为了一种奢侈。
Absolutely, it seems like people these days have fewer holidays compared to the past. Working on weekends has become somewhat of a norm, and a six-day work week isn't unusual anymore. This hectic schedule barely leaves any room for holidays. With the increasing workload and the constant chase for career advancement, holidays seem to be slipping down the priority list for many.
当然,现在的人似乎比过去有更少的假期。周末工作已经成为一种常态,而每周工作六天也不再是什么稀奇事了。这样忙碌的日程几乎没有留出任何休假的空间。随着工作量的增加和对职业发展的不断追求,假期似乎已经在许多人的优先级列表中下降了。
语法分析
比较级的使用:“fewer holidays” 这里使用了比较级形式的“fewer”来比较现在和过去的假期天数,显示了考生能够准确运用比较级来描述变化。 非正式表达的恰当运用:“somewhat of a norm” 这个表达是一个非正式但常用的说法,能够准确地表达周末工作成为一种普遍现象的情况,展示了考生对口语表达的灵活运用。 短语动词的使用:“slipping down” 是一个短语动词,用来形象地描述假期在优先级列表中的下降,体现了考生能够运用地道的英语表达。 名词短语的结构:“constant chase for career advancement” 中,“constant chase” 作为名词短语,在这里精确地描述了人们对职业发展的不懈追求,展示了考生能够使用复杂的名词短语来增加语句的信息量和复杂度。
高分词汇
  • fewer holidays
    少了假期
  • somewhat of a norm
    成为了一种常态
  • six-day work week
    每周工作六天
  • hectic schedule
    忙碌的日程
  • workload
    工作量
  • constant chase
    持续追求
  • slip down
    下降

思路 2

No
不比以前少
考官答案
I believe it's actually different now. With international shows on TV and online, we see a bigger picture of the world. We can notice if people in other countries have more free time. This makes people here want similar work conditions. They desire to travel and explore, to experience life more than the previous generation. With more money, they're taking extra time for themselves to do what they enjoy. So, I think people nowadays have more time off.
我认为现在的情况实际上有所不同。通过电视和网络上的国际节目,我们可以看到更广阔的世界。我们可以注意到其他国家的人是否有更多的闲暇时间。这使得这里的人们也希望有类似的工作条件。他们渴望旅行和探索,想要比上一代人更加体验生活。随着财富的增加,他们为自己留出了更多时间来做自己喜欢的事情。所以,我认为现在的人们有了更多的休息时间。
I think it's the opposite. Through international programmes on TV and the internet, we have a much wider world view today so we can see whether people in other countries have more time off, and so there is now a demand from people here to have the same or similar working conditions. People want to travel and see different places, they want to live more than previous generations did, and, as they have more money, they are taking more time for themselves to do what they want to do. So, nowadays, people have more time off.
我认为情况恰恰相反。通过电视和互联网上的国际节目,我们有了更广阔的世界视野,因此我们可以看到其他国家的人是否有更多的休息时间,所以现在这里的人们也要求有相同或类似的工作条件。人们想去旅行,想去看看不同的地方,他们比上一代人更想生活,而且,由于他们有了更多的钱,他们会花更多的时间去做自己想做的事情。因此,如今人们有了更多的休息时间。
语法分析
条件状语从句:"Through international programmes"中使用了条件状语从句,这表明了因果关系,增加了句子的复杂性和流畅性,符合雅思7分标准。 并列句结构:"People want to travel and see different places" 通过并列句结构连接了两个相似的想法,展示了语句的流畅性和复杂性,这是雅思口语7分所需的语言特征。 目的状语从句:在 "as they have more money" 中,使用了目的状语从句来说明人们为什么会花费更多时间做他们想做的事情,这种结构使得答案更加完整和复杂。
高分词汇
  • wider world view
    更广泛的世界观
  • international programmes on TV and the internet
    电视和互联网上的国际节目
  • demand from people
    人们的需求
  • have the same or similar working conditions
    有相同或类似的工作条件
  • want to travel and see different places
    想要旅行并看到不同的地方
  • live more than previous generations did
    过得比以前的一代更充实
  • take more time for themselves to do what they want to do
    为自己花更多时间做他们想做的事情
  • people have more time off
    人们有更多的休息时间