7 分范例

问题: Should students be allowed to use computers at school?

思路 1

Yes
应该
考官答案
It's similar to asking if students should learn to use computers, and the answer is definitely yes. Imagine if kids didn't learn about computers in school. It would be unfair to them as they wouldn't know how to use them in their future jobs. Moreover, children from families that can't afford computers would be at a disadvantage. So, having computers in schools helps level the playing field for these less privileged kids.
这类似于问学生是否应该学习使用电脑,答案当然是肯定的。想象一下,如果孩子们在学校不学习电脑,这对他们是不公平的,因为他们将来在工作中不会知道如何使用电脑。此外,来自买不起电脑的家庭的孩子们会处于劣势。因此,在学校使用电脑有助于为这些条件较差的孩子提供公平的竞争环境。
It's kind of like asking whether students should be taught how to use computers and the answer is a resounding yes. Imagine if children didn't have computer lessons, we would be doing them a huge disservice as they would have no idea how to use them when they entered the world of work. Also, families that don't have the financial means to buy computers for their children would be at a disadvantage, so using computers at school puts these more disadvantaged children on a level playing field.
这就好比问学生是否应该学习如何使用电脑,答案是肯定的。试想一下,如果孩子们不上电脑课,我们将对他们造成巨大的伤害,因为他们在进入职场后将不知道如何使用电脑。此外,那些没有经济能力为孩子购买电脑的家庭也会处于不利地位,因此在学校使用电脑能让这些处境更为不利的孩子处于公平的竞争环境中。
语法分析
类比句式:"It's kind of like asking whether" 这个类比句式开头,有效地将话题与一个更广泛认可的观点相连结,增加了论述的说服力。 虚拟语气:"Imagine if children didn't have computer lessons" 这里用了虚拟语气来描述一个假设情景,体现了高级语言能力和复杂句型的使用。 被动语态:"we would be doing them a huge disservice" 这个被动句型强调了对孩子们的影响,而非我们的行为,更加客观地表达了可能的后果。 条件句和对比:"Also, families that don't have the financial means" 通过设置条件和对比不同家庭的情况,增强了论点的多维度和深度。
高分词汇
  • resounding yes
    坚定的肯定
  • doing them a huge disservice
    对他们造成极大的伤害
  • entered the world of work
    进入职场
  • financial means
    财政手段
  • disadvantaged children
    弱势儿童
  • level playing field
    公平竞争的基础

思路 2

No
不应该
考官答案
I'm not sure if it's a good idea for students to use computers at school. There's a risk they could get hooked on the internet instead of focusing on their studies. Also, they might end up using the computers for non-educational stuff, which isn't what they're there for.
我不确定学生在学校使用电脑是否是一个好主意。他们可能会沉迷于互联网,而不是专注于学习。此外,他们可能会用电脑做一些非教育的事情,这不是他们在那里的目的。
Allowing students to use computers in school might not be the best decision. There's a considerable risk of them developing an internet addiction, which could distract from their educational goals. Moreover, the temptation to use these devices for purposes other than learning is high, potentially sidetracking them from academic pursuits.
允许学生在学校使用电脑可能不是最佳决策。他们有相当大的风险会沉迷于互联网,这可能会分散他们的教育目标。而且,他们使用这些设备进行非学习目的的诱惑很大,可能会使他们偏离学术追求。
语法分析
条件状语从句:在 "Allowing students to use computers in school" 中使用了条件状语从句,这种结构设置了一个假设的场景,为主句提供了背景,增加了句子的复杂性和逻辑性。 现在进行时:在 "developing an internet addiction" 中使用了现在进行时,表达了一个持续发生的动作或状态,这在雅思口语中体现了时态的准确运用。 现在分词短语作状语:在 "potentially sidetracking them from academic pursuits" 中,现在分词 "sidetracking" 作状语,增加了句子的描述性和动态性。
高分词汇
  • a considerable risk of
    相当大的风险
  • internet addiction
    互联网成瘾
  • distract
    分散注意力
  • educational goals
    教育目标
  • temptation
    诱惑
  • sidetrack
    使偏离