7 分范例

问题: What are the reasons that cause people to break rules?

思路 1

Lack of Awareness
缺乏意识
考官答案
I believe that most of the time, people don't think about others when they act. For example, I often see people littering on the streets as if it doesn't matter. Take smokers, for instance, they carelessly throw their cigarette butts on the ground but might throw other trash in the bin. This doesn't make sense to me because they don't seem to realize that cigarette butts are also trash. It's a strange way of thinking. They just don't consider the consequences of their actions.
我认为大多数时候,人们在行动时并不考虑他人。例如,我经常看到人们在街上乱扔垃圾,好像这没什么大不了的。就像吸烟者,他们随意地把烟头扔在地上,但可能会把其他垃圾扔进垃圾桶。对我来说,这没有道理,因为他们似乎没有意识到烟头也是垃圾。这是一种奇怪的思维方式。他们只是不考虑自己行为的后果。
I think most of the time it's a lack of consideration for others. I mean, I see people throwing rubbish on the street all the time and it's like they see it as no big deal. Take smokers for instance, they throw their cigarette butts in the street without thinking about it but they might put their rubbish in the bin. This makes no sense but they don't make the connection that their cigarette butt is also rubbish; it's a very strange way of thinking. They just don't think about things.
我认为大多数情况下,这是缺乏对他人的体谅。我的意思是,我经常看到有人把垃圾扔在街上,他们好像觉得这没什么大不了的。就拿吸烟者来说吧,他们把烟头扔在大街上,但他们可能会把垃圾扔进垃圾桶。这毫无道理,他们不把烟头当成垃圾;这是一种非常奇怪的思维方式。他们就是不思考问题。
语法分析
it作形式主语:使用 "it's like" 和 "it's a very strange way of thinking" 中的 "it" 作为形式主语,代替真实主语,这种结构使句子更加流畅和标准。 比较结构:"might put their rubbish in the bin" 与 "throw their cigarette butts in the street" 的对比,展示了能够使用比较结构来强调不一致和矛盾,这是高级口语的标志。 直接与间接语言的结合:"They just don't think about things" 的直接表述与前文的间接描述相结合,展示了灵活运用不同叙述方式的能力。
高分词汇
  • lack of consideration for others
    对他人缺乏考虑
  • throw rubbish on the street
    在街上乱扔垃圾
  • see it as no big deal
    认为这不是什么大问题
  • cigarette butts
    烟头
  • make the connection
    建立关联
  • strange way of thinking
    奇怪的思维方式
  • just don't think about things
    根本不考虑这些事情

思路 2

Personal Gain
个人利益
考官答案
People often break rules for personal benefits. Like, they might do it to get money or things faster, instead of the right way. Also, if they're impatient and don't want to wait for things to happen properly, they might break rules to speed things up.
人们经常为了个人利益而违反规则。比如,他们可能这么做是为了更快地获得金钱或物品,而不是通过正确的方式。此外,如果他们不耐烦,不愿意等待事情合法发生,他们可能会违反规则来加速进程。
One primary reason people flout rules is the pursuit of personal gain. This might manifest as a quest for financial or material benefits, where individuals bypass legitimate processes for quicker gains. Additionally, impatience plays a significant role; when individuals are unwilling to endure the time it takes for rightful outcomes, they may resort to breaking rules to expedite their goals.
人们违反规则的一个主要原因是追求个人利益。这可能表现为对经济或物质利益的追求,其中个人为了更快地获得利益而绕过合法程序。此外,不耐烦也是一个重要因素;当个人不愿意忍受获得合法结果所需的时间时,他们可能会通过打破规则来加速实现自己的目标。
语法分析
现在分词短语作状语:在“flout rules”中,使用了现在分词短语“flout”来描述人们的行为,增加了句子的复杂性和丰富性。 不定式短语作目的状语:“to expedite their goals”中,不定式短语“to expedite”作为目的状语,说明了违反规则的原因,增加了句子的深度和明确性。 名词短语作主语:“impatience plays a significant role”中,“impatience”作为主语,强调了不耐烦在违反规则过程中的重要性,提高了句子的复杂性。 条件句型:“when individuals are unwilling to endure”中,使用了条件句型来表达在特定情况下可能出现的行为,增加了句子的复杂性和逻辑性。
高分词汇
  • Flout
    违反
  • Pursuit
    追求
  • Personal gain
    个人利益
  • Manifest
    表现
  • Quest
    追求
  • Financial benefits
    经济利益
  • Material benefits
    物质利益
  • Bypass
    绕过
  • Legitimate process
    合法程序
  • Quicker gain
    更快的收益
  • Impatience
    不耐烦
  • Endure
    忍受
  • Rightful outcomes
    合法结果
  • Resort to
    诉诸于
  • Breaking rules
    打破规则
  • Expedite
    加速

思路 3

Psychological Factors
心理因素
考官答案
Some people break rules because they want excitement or to rebel. Like, they might do something risky just for the thrill. Or, they might not agree with a rule and choose to go against it to show they're against authority or society's norms.
有些人违反规则是因为他们想要刺激或反抗。比如,他们可能为了刺激而做一些冒险的事情。或者,他们可能不同意某条规则,选择违反它来表明他们反对权威或社会规范。
Rule-breaking is sometimes driven by psychological factors like the pursuit of excitement or an inclination to rebel. Individuals might engage in risky behaviors simply for the adrenaline rush it provides. Additionally, there's an element of rebellion against perceived oppressive authority or societal norms, where breaking the rules is a form of expressing dissent or asserting individuality.
违反规则有时是由心理因素驱动的,如追求兴奋或倾向于反抗。个人可能仅仅为了它提供的肾上腺素激增而参与冒险行为。此外,还有一种反抗被认为是压迫性权威或社会规范的元素,其中打破规则是表达异议或主张个性的一种形式。
语法分析
名词短语作主语:“Rule-breaking”作为主语,提出了一个中心议题,加强了句子的重点和结构。 不定式短语作目的状语:“for the adrenaline rush it provides”中,不定式短语“for the adrenaline rush”用作目的状语,解释了个人参与冒险行为的原因,增加了句子的深度和明确性。 分词短语作后置定语:“rebellion against perceived oppressive authority”中,“perceived”作为分词短语,修饰“oppressive authority”,展示了对权威的个人看法,增加了表达的复杂性。
高分词汇
  • Rule-breaking
    违反规则
  • Pursuit of excitement
    追求兴奋
  • Inclination to rebel
    倾向于反抗
  • Risky behaviors
    冒险行为
  • Adrenaline rush
    肾上腺素激增
  • Rebellion
    反抗
  • Oppressive authority
    压迫性权威
  • Societal norms
    社会规范
  • Break the rules
    打破规则
  • Express dissent
    表达异议
  • Assert individuality
    主张个性