7 分范例
话题: Describe an interesting person that you have not met in person and would like to know more about
范例
Who this person is I'm going to talk about Jane Goodall, the world-famous primatologist. I think it is fascinating, and it's a relatively new branch of biology How you know about him/her The first time I came across her name was at secondary school in biology class. We watched one of her documentaries in class and I remember being absolutely fascinated by her research. Since then, I have seen other documentaries that she's featured in too. What interesting things he/she has done So, she's a primatologist, which basically means she studies monkeys and their behavior, but what she did which was so groundbreaking was learn how to communicate with them. She started teaching them sign language so she could communicate with them and it's the first time that humans and animals have actually 'spoken' to each other. She's also a big advocate for conservation and biodiversity. And explain what you would like to know more about him/her She's written a number of books so I'd like to read them as her research is one of a kind. I'd really like to know how she has managed to make connections with primates and how far her communication goes. As she does lots of conservation work too, I'd like to know more about that as it's something that's very close to my heart. If I can, I'd like to know how I can support her in the research she's carrying out in Africa as I think it's really important.
我要谈谈世界著名的灵长类动物学家简-古道尔。 我认为它非常迷人,是生物学中一个相对较新的分支。 我第一次听到她的名字是在中学的生物课上。 我们在课堂上观看了她的一部纪录片,我记得当时我被她的研究深深吸引住了。从那以后,我还看过她参与制作的其他纪录片。 她是灵长类动物学家,主要研究猴子及其行为,但她所做的开创性工作是学习如何与猴子交流。 她开始教猴子手语,这样她就可以和它们交流了,这也是人类和动物第一次真正 "对话"。 她还是保护生物多样性的大力倡导者。 她写了很多书,我想读一读,因为她的研究是独一无二的。 我非常想知道她是如何与灵长类动物建立联系的,以及她的交流能达到什么程度。 她还做了很多保护工作,我想更多地了解这方面的情况,因为这是我非常关心的事情。如果可以的话,我想知道如何支持她在非洲开展的研究,因为我认为这非常重要。
高分词汇
  • fascinating
    吸引人的
  • primatologist
    灵长类动物学家
  • relatively new branch of biology
    相对较新的生物学分支
  • came across
    偶然遇到
  • documentaries
    纪录片
  • absolutely fascinated
    绝对着迷
  • groundbreaking
    开创性的
  • communicate with them
    与它们交流
  • sign language
    手语
  • advocate for
    倡导者
  • conservation
    保护
  • biodiversity
    生物多样性
  • connections with primates
    与灵长类动物的联系
  • support her in the research
    支持她的研究
  • research she's carrying out
    她正在进行的研究
范例
An interesting person I've never met but always been keen to learn more about is the Alibaba founder, Jack Ma. Even if I hadn't taken a business class, I would have heard of him through the news or documentaries. His life is like a riveting novel. Jack Ma's story is an incredible journey from being an English teacher to becoming one of the most influential entrepreneurs in the world. What I find particularly interesting is that he faced numerous rejections in his life, including being turned down by KFC out of 24 applicants. But his resilience and tenacity paid off, turning every failure into an opportunity. His achievements aren't limited to just business. He's a performer, having shown his entertaining side by dressing up and performing at Alibaba's annual events. He's also a global educator, emphasizing the importance of adaptability in the ever-changing world. If I had the chance, I would delve into his unique perspectives on education and how he envisions the future of technology. Jack Ma represents the blend of traditional wisdom and modern innovation, and that's precisely what makes him so intriguing to me.
我从未见过但一直很想了解的一个有趣的人是阿里巴巴创始人马云。即使我没有上过商业课,我也会通过新闻或纪录片了解他。他的生活就像一本扣人心弦的小说。 马云的故事是从英语教师成为世界上最有影响力的企业家之一的令人难以置信的旅程。我觉得特别有趣的是,他在生活中面临了许多拒绝,包括在24名申请者中被肯德基拒绝。但他的韧性和坚韧不拔得到了回报,将每次失败都变成了一个机会。 他的成就不仅限于商业。他是一个表演者,在阿里巴巴的年度活动上通过装扮和表演展现了他的娱乐一面。他还是一个全球教育家,强调在不断变化的世界中适应性的重要性。 如果我有机会,我会深入研究他对教育的独特观点,以及他如何设想技术的未来。马云代表了传统智慧和现代创新的结合,这正是我对他如此感兴趣的原因。
语法分析
● 复杂句和简单句结合:例如:"Jack Ma's story is an incredible journey from being an English teacher to becoming one of the most influential entrepreneurs in the world." 这个句子使用了“from...to...”结构,展示了马云的成长和变化。 ● 时态运用恰当:例如:"His achievements aren't limited to just business." 这句话使用了现在时,描述了一个事实。 ● 表达层次感:例如:"He's a performer, having shown his entertaining side by dressing up and performing at Alibaba's annual events." 这个句子通过使用现在分词“having shown”结构,增加了句子的复杂性。
高分词汇
  • riveting
    扣人心弦的
  • resilience
    韧性
  • tenacity
    坚韧不拔
  • performer
    表演者
  • adaptability
    适应性
  • delve into
    深入研究
  • perspectives
    观点
  • envision
    设想
  • blend
    结合
  • intriguing
    有趣的