7 分范例

问题: Should students learn to cook at school?

思路 1

Yes
应该学
考官答案
Sure, why not? Students study many subjects in school they won't use after graduating. Cooking, however, is a lifelong skill, like riding a bike. Many students go abroad for university and struggle with cooking. They end up relying on ready meals or restaurants, which are unhealthy. Learning to cook would be very beneficial.
当然可以,为什么不呢?学生在学校学习的许多科目毕业后不会再用到。然而,烹饪是一项终身技能,就像骑自行车一样。许多学生出国上大学,但却不会做饭。他们最终依赖现成的餐点或餐馆,这些都是不健康的选择。学会烹饪将非常有益。
Yes, why not? Students have to study lots of subjects at school that, once they graduate, they will never ever study or use again. Cookery on the other hand is something that they will use for the rest of their lives. It's like riding a bike, so once you know how to do it, you never forget. So many students go to university abroad these days and they have no idea how to cook. This puts an added burden on them as they struggle to find things to eat and either rely on ready meals, or restaurants for food. Both are really unhealthy options.
是的,为什么不呢?学生在学校要学习很多科目,一旦毕业,他们就再也不会学习或使用这些科目了。而烹饪则是他们终生受用的东西。这就像骑自行车一样,一旦学会了,就永远不会忘记。如今,许多学生到国外上大学,却不知道如何烹饪。这给他们增加了额外的负担,因为他们很难找到吃的东西,要么依赖于即食食品,要么依赖于餐馆的食物。 这两种选择都非常不健康。
语法分析
现在分词作状语:"Students have to study lots of subjects at school that, once they graduate, they will never ever study or use again" 中的现在分词 "studying" 描述了学习的持续状态,增加了句子的复杂性。 类比:"It's like riding a bike" 使用类比来比较烹饪技能和骑自行车,增强了观点的通俗易懂性。 现在进行时态:"So many students go to university abroad these days and they have no idea how to cook" 使用现在进行时态描述目前学生的状况,展现了话题的现实相关性和紧迫感。
高分词汇
  • never ever study or use again
    以后再也不会学习或使用
  • Cookery on the other hand is something that they will use for the rest of their lives
    而烹饪则是他们将终身使用的东西
  • once you know how to do it, you never forget
    一旦你知道如何做,就永远不会忘记
  • go to university abroad these days
    近年来去国外上大学
  • struggle to find things to eat
    努力找到吃的东西
  • rely on ready meals
    依赖现成的餐点
  • unhealthy options
    不健康的选择

思路 2

No
不应该学
考官答案
I don't think cooking should be part of the school curriculum. The main reason is that students already have packed timetables with essential academic subjects. Adding cooking classes could overburden them. Moreover, cooking involves using knives and other potentially dangerous kitchen tools, which might not be suitable for younger students due to safety concerns.
我认为烹饪不应该成为学校课程的一部分。主要原因是学生们的时间表已经排满了必要的学术科目。增加烹饪课可能会给他们带来过重的负担。此外,烹饪涉及使用刀具和其他可能危险的厨房工具,这对年纪较小的学生来说可能不适合,因为存在安全隐患。
Incorporating cooking into school curricula might not be the most feasible idea. Firstly, students' schedules are already quite full with critical academic subjects, leaving little room for additional classes. Integrating cooking lessons could add to their workload, which may not be ideal. Additionally, cooking classes involve the use of sharp knives and other equipment, posing safety risks, particularly for younger students. This makes it impractical and potentially hazardous.
将烹饪纳入学校课程可能不是最可行的想法。首先,学生们的日程已经相当满,几乎没有空间添加额外的课程。加入烹饪课可能会增加他们的工作量,这可能并不理想。此外,烹饪课程涉及使用锋利的刀具和其他设备,尤其对年轻学生来说,这构成了安全风险。这使得它不切实际且可能危险。
语法分析
1. 被动语态: “Incorporating cooking into school curricula”使用了被动语态,突出了提议的对象和行为,增加了句子的正式性和复杂度。 2. 副词修饰形容词: “the most feasible idea”中的“most”修饰形容词“feasible”,增强了句子的强调效果。 3. 现在分词作定语: “integrating cooking lessons”中的“integrating”作为现在分词,用作定语,为句子增加了动态感和复杂性。 4. 条件状语从句: “posing safety risks, particularly for younger students”作为条件状语从句,指出了实施该建议可能面临的问题,增加了句子的深度和逻辑性。
高分词汇
  • incorporating cooking into school curricula
    将烹饪纳入学校课程
  • feasible idea
    可行的想法
  • full with critical academic subjects
    充满关键的学术科目
  • little room for additional classes
    很少的额外课程空间
  • integrate cooking lessons
    整合烹饪课程
  • ideal
    理想的
  • sharp knives and other equipment
    尖锐的刀具和其他设备
  • safety risks
    安全风险
  • younger students
    年轻学生
  • impractical and potentially hazardous
    不切实际且可能危险