7 分范例

问题: Should students have physical education and do sports at school?

思路 1

Yes
应该
考官答案
Definitely, students need to exercise more these days. There are so many overweight kids because they mostly sit around, play on computers, and don’t go out much. Plus, they eat too much unhealthy food. I think kids should have physical education (PE) every day at school until they start university. Studies show that doing sports helps kids concentrate better in their classes.
当然,现在的学生需要更多的锻炼。因为他们大多数时间坐着,玩电脑,很少出去。而且,他们吃太多不健康的食物。我认为孩子们应该每天在学校进行体育运动,直到他们开始上大学。研究表明,做运动有助于孩子们在课堂上更好地集中注意力。
In this day and age, absolutely. The number of overweight kids I see is staggering and it's because a lot of them are leading very sedentary lives, in front of computers, not playing in the park, and eating far too much food that isn't always good for them. If anything, children should be doing PE every day in school all the way up until they go to university. All the research suggests that expending this energy doing sports helps children focus in class far more.
在当今时代,学生要运动。我所看到的超重儿童数量惊人,这是因为他们中的很多人都过着久坐不动的生活,对着电脑,不去公园玩耍,吃了太多并不总是对身体有益的食物。如果有必要的话,孩子们应该每天在学校做体育运动,一直到上大学。所有的研究都表明,在体育运动中消耗这些精力有助于孩子们在课堂上更加专注。
语法分析
过去分词短语作定语:"The number of overweight kids" 中的 "overweight" 作为过去分词短语用作定语,直接修饰名词,使描述更加精确和生动。 副词短语:"far more" 在句子中用作副词短语,提供了程度上的强调,增强了表述的力度,体现出较高水平的语言技巧。 条件句型:"If anything, children should be doing PE every day" 这个条件句型的使用,提供了一个假设性的建议,展示了能够灵活运用不同句型来表达观点。
高分词汇
  • in this day and age
    在当今时代
  • overweight kid
    超重的孩子
  • staggering
    令人震惊的
  • sedentary lives
    久坐的生活方式
  • in front of computers
    坐在电脑前
  • play in the park
    在公园玩耍
  • far too much food
    过多的食物
  • isn't always good for them
    对他们不一定有好处
  • expend this energy
    消耗这种能量
  • help children focus in class
    帮助孩子集中注意力上课

思路 2

No
不应该
考官答案
I don't really think sports should be a big part of school. There are more crucial subjects like math or science that need more focus. Plus, sports can be risky and lead to injuries, which isn't ideal for students. Schools should prioritize academic learning over sports.
我不太认为体育应该成为学校的重要组成部分。有更重要的科目,比如数学或科学,需要更多的关注。另外,体育运动可能有风险,会导致受伤,这对学生来说并不理想。学校应该优先考虑学术学习而不是体育运动。
Personally, I'm of the view that physical education shouldn't be emphasized too much in schools. The rationale is that academic subjects, especially those central to future careers like mathematics or science, demand greater attention. Moreover, engaging in sports carries an inherent risk of injuries, which can be detrimental to a student's overall well-being and academic progress. Hence, academic pursuits should take precedence over physical activities in the educational setting.
我个人认为,在学校不应过分强调体育教育。原因是学术科目,特别是那些与未来职业息息相关的科目,如数学或科学,需要更多的关注。此外,参与体育运动本身就存在受伤的风险,这可能对学生的整体健康和学业进展产生不利影响。因此,在教育环境中,学术追求应优先于体育活动。
语法分析
情态动词用法:"shouldn't be emphasized too much" 使用了情态动词"should"来表示建议或可能,表明作者在对体育教育的重视程度上持保留态度。 名词短语:"The rationale is that academic subjects..." 这里使用了名词短语来引出对学术科目重要性的解释,体现了语句的清晰和逻辑性。 比较级结构:"demand greater attention" 使用了比较级形式"greater",表示学术科目需要比体育更多的关注,增强了论点的对比和强调效果。
高分词汇
  • shouldn't be emphasized too much
    不应过分强调
  • rationale
    理由
  • central to future careers
    与未来职业息息相关
  • demand greater attention
    需要更多的关注
  • inherent risk of injuries
    固有的受伤风险
  • detrimental to
    对...有害
  • should take precedence over
    应优先于