7 分范例

问题: Do people watch useless advertising in this day and age?

思路 1

Yes
看无用的广告
考官答案
Yes, I think we're used to seeing ads all the time if we're using screens. Often, we see the same advertisement many times online and have to wait for it to end. It can be annoying, but marketing is really big nowadays. Advertisers know a lot about us through our phones and use that info to show us more ads.
是的,我认为如果我们使用屏幕的话,我们已经习惯了总是看到广告。我们经常在网上看到同一条广告很多次,只能等它结束。这可能很烦人,但现在营销真的很大。广告商通过我们的手机了解了很多关于我们的信息,并利用这些信息向我们展示更多广告。
Yes, I think we've just come to accept that adverts are part of our daily experience if we use any kind of screen. Sometimes we are shown the same ad twenty or thirty times online and we just have to sit through it and wait until it's finished, unfortunately. It's very frustrating but marketing is a bigger business than it's ever been these days. They have such access to our lives through our phones and they can use that information to push their ads more and more.
是的,我认为,如果我们使用任何一种屏幕,我们就会接受广告是我们日常体验的一部分。有时,我们会在网上看到二三十次同样的广告,不幸的是,我们只能坐着等待广告结束。 这让人非常沮丧,但如今营销是一门比以往任何时候都要大的生意。他们可以通过我们的手机了解我们的生活,他们可以利用这些信息越来越多地推送他们的广告。
语法分析
强调句型:"It's very frustrating but marketing is a bigger business than it's ever been these days" 中使用了强调句型来突出营销在现代社会的重要性和规模,增强了语言的表达力。 频率副词:"Sometimes we are shown the same ad twenty or thirty times online" 这句中使用了频率副词(如“twenty or thirty times”),展示了对频率的具体而准确的描述,增加了表述的具体性。 被动语态:整个答案中多次使用被动语态,如"we are shown the same ad",这种用法使语言更加客观和中立,同时展示了使用被动语态的能力。 现在完成时:"They have such access to our lives" 这句使用了现在完成时,有效地表达了广告商对个人信息获取的持续状态,显示了对时态的正确运用。
高分词汇
  • come to accept
    逐渐接受
  • part of our daily experience
    我们日常经历的一部分
  • sit through
    耐心地坐着,忍耐
  • wait until it's finished
    等待它结束
  • bigger business than it's ever been
    比以往任何时候都更大的生意
  • have access to our lives
    能够接入我们的生活

思路 2

No
没有看无用的广告
考官答案
Nowadays, people don't really watch ads they're not interested in. Most of the time, we can skip them after a few seconds. Also, a lot of online ads are tailored to our interests, so they're more relevant to us. Plus, the advanced targeting means we often find useful or interesting products through these ads.
如今,人们不会真的去看他们不感兴趣的广告。大多数时候,我们可以在几秒钟后跳过它们。此外,许多在线广告都是根据我们的兴趣定制的,所以它们对我们来说更加相关。而且,高级的定位手段经常让我们通过这些广告发现有用或有趣的产品。
In this era, watching irrelevant ads has become less common. The ability to skip ads after a brief duration allows viewers to bypass content that doesn't pique their interest. Moreover, the sophistication of Internet advertising means many ads are tailored to individual preferences, making them more engaging and less likely to be perceived as useless. This personalization often results in discovering products or services that are actually beneficial.
在这个时代,观看无关广告已经变得不那么常见。在短时间内就能跳过广告的功能让观众可以绕过那些不引起他们兴趣的内容。此外,互联网广告的精细化意味着许多广告都是根据个人偏好量身定制的,使它们更具吸引力,也不太可能被视为无用。这种个性化常常导致发现实际上有益的产品或服务。
语法分析
动词不定式作目的状语: "to skip ads after a brief duration" 中的 "to skip" 作为不定式,用作目的状语,表达了观众跳过广告的目的,展示了句子的目的性和结构复杂度。 现在分词作定语: "tailored to individual preferences" 中的 "tailored" 作为现在分词,用作定语修饰广告,增加了句子的描述性和复杂性。 被动语态: "less likely to be perceived as useless" 使用了被动语态,表达了广告不太可能被认为无用的概念,体现了句子结构的多样性。 现在分词短语作结果状语: "resulting in discovering products or services" 中的 "resulting in" 作为现在分词短语,用作结果状语,展示了个性化广告导致发现有益产品或服务的结果,显示了句子的因果关系和复杂性。
高分词汇
  • irrelevant ads
    无关的广告
  • skip ads
    跳过广告
  • brief duration
    短暂时间
  • bypass
    绕过
  • pique their interest
    引起他们的兴趣
  • sophistication
    复杂性
  • tailored
    定制的
  • preferences
    偏好
  • engaging
    吸引人的
  • perceived as useless
    被视为无用
  • personalization
    个性化
  • beneficial
    有益的