7 分范例
话题: Describe a good advertisement that you think is useful
范例
A picture of Yao Ming Where you can see it I'm going to talk about an advert featuring Yao Mong, a really famous Chinese basketball player who played in the NBA. It's on quite a few billboards near where I live, and they went up about a week ago. What it shows It's a photo of him giving a fist bump to an elephant, which is really well done and it has a clear message about the ivory trade and how it needs to be stopped. Why you think it’s useful What stands out to me is the message. It's saying that people need to stop buying ivory goods to protect elephants. He's done lots of work about this, visiting countries where poaching is an issue, trying to raise the profile of this problem. It's trying to raise people's awareness of the issue. Explain how you feel about it I think it's a really good ad, and it just says a lot about him as a person. He's appeared in numerous adverts about the ivory trade and how it needs to be stopped. He's made documentaries about the trade in elephant tusks and rhino horns and is an advocate for the banning of the trade in animal parts. It's something that I also believe in and is very close to my heart and this has increased my admiration of him.
我要谈的是以姚明为主角的一则广告,姚明是一位非常著名的中国篮球运动员,曾在 NBA 打球。我住的地方附近有很多广告牌都有这个广告,大约一周前才挂出来。 这是一张姚明与大象击掌的照片,做得非常好,传达了关于象牙贸易以及如何制止象牙贸易的明确信息。 让我眼前一亮的是它传达的信息。它说人们需要停止购买象牙制品,以保护大象。他为此做了大量工作,访问了偷猎问题严重的国家,试图提高人们对这一问题的认识。他试图提高人们对这个问题的认识。 我认为这是一则非常好的广告,也很好地诠释了他的为人。他曾多次出现在关于象牙贸易以及如何制止象牙贸易的广告中。他还拍摄了关于象牙和犀牛角贸易的纪录片,并倡导禁止动物器官贸易。这也是我所相信的,而且非常贴近我的内心,这也增加了我对他的钦佩之情。
高分词汇
  • an advert featuring...
    一则以...为特色的广告
  • billboards
    广告牌
  • fist bump
    击掌
  • ivory trade
    象牙贸易
  • raise the profile
    提高…的关注度
  • ivory goods
    象牙制品
  • poach
    偷猎
  • raise people's awareness
    提高人们的意识
  • documentaries
    纪录片
  • advocate
    拥护者,提倡者
  • increase my admiration of
    增加我对…的钦佩
范例
One advertisement that stands out in my mind as particularly useful is a public service campaign advocating for mental health awareness. I stumbled upon this impactful ad while scrolling through social media platforms like Weibo and Tiktok. One advertisement that stands out in my mind as particularly useful is a public service campaign advocating for mental health awareness. I stumbled upon this impactful ad while scrolling through social media platforms like Facebook and Instagram. The ad itself is visually captivating, featuring dark, brooding clouds that gradually disperse, revealing a bright sky. Overlaying the visuals are uplifting messages about seeking help and breaking the stigma surrounding mental health. A contact number for a helpline is prominently displayed at the end. I find this ad exceptionally useful because mental health is often an overlooked or taboo topic in many societies. By employing compelling visuals and straightforward messages, this ad actively engages its audience and educates them about the importance of mental well-being. It directs people to resources where they can get professional help, which is invaluable in a crisis. As for how I feel about it, I'm genuinely grateful such ads exist. They serve as a timely reminder in our fast-paced world that it's okay to seek help and prioritize our mental health. Moreover, I appreciate how the ad uses the power of storytelling to bring a sensitive topic into the mainstream conversation. It's not just an ad; it's a catalyst for change.
我觉得特别有用的一个广告是一个倡导心理健康意识的公共服务宣传活动。当我在社交媒体平台如微博和抖音上刷新时,偶然发现了这个有影响力的广告。 广告本身视觉上引人注目,以深沉的乌云为特点,逐渐消散,露出明亮的天空。叠加在视觉效果上的是关于寻求帮助和打破围绕心理健康的成见的振奋人心的信息。末尾明显地展示了一个求助热线的联系号码。 我觉得这个广告特别有用,因为心理健康在许多社会中通常是一个被忽视或是忌讳的话题。通过运用引人注目的视觉效果和直截了当的信息,这个广告积极地吸引观众,并教育他们认识到心理健康的重要性。它指引人们到可以获得专业帮助的资源,这在危机时刻是无价的。 关于我对它的感觉,我真心感到这样的广告存在是值得感激的。在我们快节奏的世界中,它们及时地提醒我们,寻求帮助和优先考虑我们的心理健康是可以的。此外,我欣赏这个广告如何利用故事的力量,把一个敏感的话题引入主流对话中。这不仅仅是一个广告;它是一个催化剂,带来变化。
语法分析
复杂句和简单句结合: 例如,"By employing compelling visuals and straightforward messages, this ad actively engages its audience and educates them about the importance of mental well-being." 这个句子使用了以“By”开始的状语从句。 时态运用恰当: 答案主要使用了一般现在时,用于描述一般的观点和感受。 表达层次感: 通过使用"moreover," "as for," 和 "exceptionally," 答案展示了丰富的表达层次。 修饰词和形容词的巧妙使用: 例如,"public service campaign," "compelling visuals," 和 "straightforward messages" 增加了描述的生动性和准确性。 逻辑连贯性和结构清晰: 通过使用 "As for," "I find," 和 "Moreover," 答案呈现了清晰的逻辑和结构。
高分词汇
  • Stumbled upon
    偶然发现
  • Impactful
    有影响力的
  • Captivating
    引人注目的
  • Disperse
    消散
  • Overlooked
    被忽视的
  • Taboo
    忌讳
  • Invaluable
    无价的
  • Catalyst
    催化剂