7 分范例
话题: Describe an activity that made you feel tired
范例
A meal for the family When and where it took place I'm going to talk about the time I cooked a huge meal for all my family at my house about one month ago. What the activity was It was my mum's birthday and all the family came over: my sister, my cousins, and my mum and dad... My uncle helped me cook a feast for everyone as he is an amazing chef. We had discussed what to make and had bought all the ingredients the day before. Why you took part in it The original plan had been to go to a restaurant and eat there but one of my cousins has a lot of allergies so I said I would make dinner for everyone at my house as it would be easier. I love cooking and I love taking traditional recipes and adapting them to experiment with flavors. And explain why it made you feel tired I was so tired by the end because the menu I had worked on with my uncle included so many dishes. It took most of the day to make everything but the food he made was amazing and everyone commented on how great it was, which was a relief.
我要讲的是大约一个月前,我在家里为全家人做了一顿大餐。 那天是我妈妈的生日,全家人都来了,包括我姐姐、我的表兄妹和我爸爸妈妈。 我舅舅帮我为大家做了一顿大餐,因为他是个很棒的厨师。我们商量好了要做什么,并在前一天买好了所有的食材。 原计划是去餐馆吃饭,但我的一个表弟有很多过敏症,所以我说我要在家里为大家做晚饭,因为这样更方便。我喜欢烹饪,喜欢将传统食谱加以改良,尝试各种口味。 最后我累得不行,因为我和叔叔一起制定的菜单包含了太多的菜肴。我花了大半天的时间做完了所有的菜,但是他做的菜非常棒,每个人都夸他做的菜很棒,这让我松了一口气。
高分词汇
  • cook a huge meal
    烹制丰盛的一餐
  • amazing chef
    出色的厨师
  • ingredients
    食材
  • traditional recipes
    传统食谱
  • adapt
    改编
  • experiment with flavors
    尝试各种风味
  • allergies
    过敏
  • original plan
    原计划
  • comment on
    评论
  • relief
    轻松
范例
About two years ago, I took part in a demanding hiking expedition. The event transpired on a sunny Saturday in a picturesque national park situated about 50 miles from my city. It was an all-day affair, beginning early in the morning and wrapping up late in the afternoon. The activity was a guided trek along a challenging trail that included steep inclines and intricate paths. Despite the physical intensity, the experience was uplifting, as the trail meandered through lush forests and passed by tranquil lakes. The payoff at the summit, featuring an awe-inspiring panoramic view, made all the effort worthwhile. As for why it left me feeling drained, multiple factors contributed. Firstly, the prolonged physical exertion took a toll on my stamina. Walking uphill for nearly seven hours, with a backpack loaded with provisions, was taxing. Secondly, the weather, albeit sunny, was surprisingly hot, which escalated the fatigue. Lastly, though the landscape was stunning, remaining alert and navigating through the complicated terrain demanded mental concentration, adding another layer of exhaustion. In summary, the hike was both exhilarating and taxing, a paradoxical experience that combined the joy of nature with the fatigue born out of challenging physical and mental engagement.
大约两年前,我参加了一次要求非常高的徒步探险。这个活动发生在一个阳光明媚的周六,在距离我所在城市大约50英里的一个风景如画的国家公园里。这是一个从早到晚的全天活动。 这个活动是一次在具有挑战性的小径上进行的有导游的徒步旅行,包括陡峭的上坡和复杂的路径。尽管体力上非常激烈,但这次经历非常令人振奋,因为小径穿越了茂密的森林,并经过了宁静的湖泊。到达山顶后,令人惊叹的全景视野使所有的努力都变得值得。 至于为什么它让我感到疲惫,有多个因素。首先,长时间的体力劳动消耗了我的体力。几乎走了七个小时的上坡路,背着装满食品的背包,是很费劲的。其次,尽管天气晴朗,但出奇地炎热,这加剧了疲劳感。最后,尽管景色很美,但保持警觉并通过复杂的地形需要精神集中,这增加了另一层疲惫感。 总结而言,这次徒步旅行既令人振奋又费力,是一种将自然之乐与出于具有挑战性的身体和精神参与而产生的疲劳相结合的矛盾体验。
语法分析
反义疑问句的使用: 如"the weather, albeit sunny, was surprisingly hot," 这里使用了“albeit”来引出反义疑问句,增加了句子的复杂性。 过去分词作为定语: 在“a demanding hiking expedition”中,“demanding”作为过去分词用作定语,增加了描述的丰富性。 名词和形容词的搭配: 例如,在"an awe-inspiring panoramic view"中,"awe-inspiring"和"panoramic"是很好地搭配的形容词,使名词“view”更加生动。 从句与并列句的结合: 在“multiple factors contributed. Firstly, the prolonged physical exertion took a toll on my stamina. Secondly, the weather escalated the fatigue.”
高分词汇
  • Demanding
    要求高的
  • Expedition
    探险
  • Tranquil
    宁静的
  • Panoramic
    全景的
  • Drained
    疲惫的
  • Prolonged
    长时间的
  • Exertion
    劳动
  • Toll
    损耗
  • Provisions
    食品
  • Paradoxical
    矛盾的