7 分范例
话题: Describe a party that you enjoyed
范例
A surprise party When and where the party was held I'm going to talk about a surprise party I held about six months ago for my best friend. I held it in my apartment, which is quite small. Who attended the party I invited ten close friends from our course at university and we all arrived about an hour before my best friend did so we could set everything up. There was so much to do but we all worked together to decorate the room and prepare the food. What kind of party it was As I said, it was a surprise party so my best friend had no idea about it. She was turning 21 and going to move abroad soon so it was the last chance to celebrate with her for a while. I took a photo of her as she walked in and it's the moment we've just turned the lights on to surprise her. She looks really shocked and it captures the exact moment that everyone shouted 'surprise'. It's such a great photo although she thinks she looks really weird. What you did at the party I had told her she could come for dinner and so we prepared a feast. We had such a good time all together, eating, drinking and dancing. Explain why you enjoyed the party It was the first time I'd thrown a surprise party and it was such a success. She had no idea about it and she was so grateful. It's such a great memory. It was a lot of work though so I don't know if I'd volunteer to do it again, but it was certainly worth the effort.
我要讲的是大约六个月前我为我最好的朋友举办的一个惊喜派对。派对是在我很小的公寓里举行的。 我邀请了我们大学中的十位好友,我们都比我最好的朋友早到了一个小时,这样我们就可以准备好一切。要做的事情太多了,但我们都齐心协力布置房间和准备食物。 正如我所说,这是一个惊喜派对,所以我最好的朋友对此一无所知。她马上就要 21 岁了,而且马上就要搬到国外去,所以这是最后一次和她一起庆祝的机会了。我在她进门时给她拍了一张照片,那是我们刚打开灯给她惊喜的那一刻。她看起来非常震惊,而这张照片正好捕捉到了大家喊 "惊喜 "的那一刻。虽然她觉得自己看起来很奇怪,但这是一张很棒的照片。 我告诉她可以来吃晚饭,于是我们准备了一场盛宴。我们一起吃饭、喝酒、跳舞,玩得非常开心。 这是我第一次举办惊喜派对,而且非常成功。她对此一无所知,非常感激。这真是一段美好的回忆。虽然工作量很大,我不知道自己是否还会自愿再做一次,但付出肯定是值得的。
高分词汇
  • hosted
    举办
  • set everything up
    布置一切
  • decorate the room
    装饰房间
  • prepare the food
    准备食物
  • capture the exact moment
    捕捉精准瞬间
  • last chance to celebrate
    最后的庆祝机会
  • prepare a feast
    准备盛宴
  • thrown a surprise party
    举办惊喜派对
  • grateful
    感激的
  • worth the effort
    值得付出努力
范例
A couple of years ago, I attended a delightful garden party to celebrate a close friend's engagement. The event took place in her expansive backyard, beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements. It was a summer evening, and the atmosphere was nothing short of magical. The party was essentially a casual get-together but had an elegant touch to it. The diverse mix of people, from family members to college friends, contributed to a convivial vibe. What made the party stand out was the live acoustic music that added a sense of serenity, counterbalancing the jovial laughter and animated conversations. As for why I enjoyed the party, multiple factors came into play. First and foremost, the ambience was welcoming, making everyone feel instantly at home. Secondly, the host had put meticulous effort into planning, evident from the array of delectable appetizers to the inventive cocktail menu. Last but not least, the evening was brimming with heartwarming moments. The couple exchanged personalized vows, and you could sense the palpable emotion in the air, making the celebration not just fun but profoundly meaningful. In essence, the party was an amalgamation of excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere imbued with love and happiness. It's an experience that holds a special place in my heart, one I fondly reminisce about.
几年前,我参加了一个为了庆祝好友订婚而举办的美妙的花园派对。活动在她宽敞的后院里举行,那里装饰得十分美丽,挂满了闪烁的仙女灯和鲜艳的花卉。那是一个夏日的晚上,氛围简直像魔法一样。 这个派对本质上是一个休闲的聚会,但又有一丝优雅的触感。来自家庭成员到大学朋友的多样人群营造了一种友好的氛围。使派对脱颖而出的是现场的原声音乐,这增加了一种宁静感,与欢乐的笑声和活跃的对话形成平衡。 至于为什么我喜欢这个派对,有多个因素。首先,氛围非常热情,让每个人都立即感到宾至如归。其次,主人精心策划了这个派对,从美味的开胃菜到创意的鸡尾酒菜单都可以看出。最后但同样重要的是,那个晚上充满了温暖的时刻。这对新人互换了个性化的誓言,你可以感觉到空气中弥漫的情感,使得庆祝活动不仅有趣,而且意义非凡。 总之,这个派对是出色的陪伴、美味的食物和充满爱与幸福的氛围的综合体。这是一次我常怀念的特殊经历。
语法分析
非限制性定语从句的应用: 例如,在“the event took place in her expansive backyard, beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements”中,“beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements” 是一个非限制性定语从句,用来进一步描述“her expansive backyard”,增加了描述的丰富性。 形容词和副词的合理搭配: 如 "essentially a casual get-together but had an elegant touch to it" 这一句,使用了“essentially”和“elegant touch”来准确而形象地描述派对的风格。 平行结构的使用: 在“the party was an amalgamation of excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere imbued with love and happiness”这一句中,"excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere" 形成了平行结构,使句子更加流畅和有力。 条件从句与主句的组合: 例如,“If the weather is fine, I usually head there on weekends” 这一句不仅运用了条件从句,同时与主句的结合也很自然,增加了句子的复杂性。 高级词汇与复合句的结合: "It's an experience that holds a special place in my heart, one I fondly reminisce about" 这个句子使用了"that holds a special place in my heart"作为定语从句,并在后面添加了“one I fondly reminisce about”,增加了表达的深度和准确性。
高分词汇
  • Delightful
    美妙的
  • Expansive
    宽敞的
  • Adorned
    装饰
  • Convivial
    友好的
  • Meticulous
    精心的
  • Delectable
    美味的
  • Palpable
    可感觉到的
  • Amalgamation
    综合体
  • Scrumptious
    美味的
  • Reminisce
    怀念