7 分范例
话题: Describe a drawing/painting that you like
范例
A picture of Yao Ming When you first saw the painting I'm going to talk about a painting I saw in an art exhibition about famous Chinese sportspeople last month in my hometown. What the painting is about The painting that stood out most to me was one of Yao Ming, a basketball player who played in the NBA. It's a painting of him giving a fist bump to an elephant, which is really well done and it has a clear message about the ivory trade and how it needs to be stopped. Who drew/painted it I don't know who did the painting but it was commissioned by WildAid, a charity that helps protect wildlife around the world. And explain why you like this painting/drawing What stands out to me is the message. It's saying that people need to stop buying ivory goods to protect elephants. He's done lots of work about this, visiting countries where poaching is an issue, trying to raise the profile of this problem. It's something that I also believe in and I think this is why the painting made such an impression on me.
我想谈谈我上个月在家乡举办的中国体育名人艺术展上看到的一幅画。 最让我印象深刻的是一幅画,画的是在 NBA 打球的篮球运动员姚明。这幅画画的是他向一头大象挥拳致意,画得非常好,而且明确传达了关于象牙贸易以及如何制止象牙贸易的信息。 我不知道这幅画是谁画的,但它是受 WildAid 委托创作的,WildAid 是一个帮助保护世界各地野生动物的慈善机构。 让我印象深刻的是画中传达的信息。它在说,人们需要停止购买象牙制品,以保护大象。他为此做了大量工作,访问偷猎问题严重的国家,试图提高人们对这一问题的关注。这也是我所相信的,我想这就是这幅画给我留下如此深刻印象的原因。
高分词汇
  • art exhibition
    艺术展览
  • stand out
    突出
  • fist bump
    击掌
  • ivory trade
    象牙贸易
  • commission
    委托制作
  • WildAid
    野生救援组织
  • protect wildlife
    保护野生动物
  • charity
    慈善组织
  • ivory goods
    象牙制品
  • poach
    偷猎
  • raise the profile
    提高…的关注度
范例
The first time I laid eyes on the painting "Starry Night" was during a high school art history class. This iconic masterpiece was created by the Dutch Post-Impressionist artist Vincent van Gogh in 1889. The painting primarily portrays a serene yet turbulent night sky filled with swirling stars over a quaint French village. The juxtaposition of the vibrant sky and the tranquil town makes for a striking contrast. What stands out is the cypress tree that stretches up like a pillar, connecting earth and heaven, almost as if it's reaching for the stars. Vincent van Gogh, a genius plagued by mental illnesses, managed to convey a plethora of emotions through this painting. Many art critics believe that "Starry Night" reflects van Gogh's emotional turmoil and his awe for the mysteriousness of the night sky. Every time I look at the painting, I'm consumed by a complex blend of feelings—there's a sense of peace, tinged with a bit of melancholy. The swirling patterns in the sky often remind me of life's unpredictability yet inherent beauty. It evokes a strong emotional response, bordering on transcendental, as if I'm momentarily lifted out of the mundanity of everyday life. In summary, "Starry Night" isn't just a painting; it's an experience, a window into van Gogh's soul, and a representation of the human condition. Its mesmerizing aesthetic and profound emotional depth make it an unforgettable piece of art that continues to captivate audiences worldwide.
我第一次看到“星夜”这幅画是在高中的艺术历史课上。这是由荷兰后印象派艺术家文森特·梵高在1889年创作的标志性杰作。 这幅画主要描绘了一个宁静而又多变的夜空,上面有旋转的星星,下面是一个安静的法国小镇。生动的天空和宁静的小镇形成了鲜明的对比。特别引人注目的是一棵柏树,它像一根柱子一样伸向天空,仿佛在触摸星星。 患有精神疾病的天才艺术家文森特·梵高通过这幅画传达了丰富的情感。许多艺术评论家认为“星夜”反映了梵高的情感波动和他对夜空神秘性的敬畏。 每次看这幅画时,我都会被一种复杂的情感混合体所吸引——有一种和平感,但也带有一点忧郁。天空中的旋转图案经常让我想到生活的不可预测性但也有固有的美丽。它引发了一种强烈的情感反应,几乎是超验的,仿佛我暂时摆脱了日常生活的平凡。 总之,“星夜”不仅仅是一幅画;它是一种体验,是梵高灵魂的一扇窗口,也是人类状况的一种代表。其迷人的美学和深刻的情感深度使其成为一个令人难以忘怀的艺术品,继续吸引全球观众。
语法分析
复杂句和简单句结合: 例如, "The juxtaposition of the vibrant sky and the tranquil town makes for a striking contrast." 使用了“of the”和“and”来构成一个并列的复合名词。 时态运用恰当: 答案中使用了一般过去时和现在时,来描述过去和现在的感受。 表达层次感: 通过使用 "Every time," "In summary," 和 "tinged with," 答案体现了表达的层次和深度。 逻辑连贯和时间线性: 使用了 “Moreover,” “Every time,” 和 “In summary,” 保证了时间和逻辑的连贯性。 修饰词和名词的有效使用: 例如, "iconic," "masterpiece," 和 "transcendental" 这些词增加了描述的深度和丰富性。
高分词汇
  • Laid eyes on
    第一次看到
  • Iconic
    标志性的
  • Masterpiece
    杰作
  • Juxtaposition
    并置
  • Tranquil
    宁静的
  • Cypress
    柏树
  • Plagued
    困扰
  • Plethora
    大量
  • Melancholy
    忧郁
  • Transcendental
    超验的