7 分范例
话题: Describe a person who enjoys cooking for others
范例
A meal for the family Who this person is I'm going to talk about my uncle who is a professional cook. He's been doing it for about ten years or so now and he has his own restaurant in town. What he/she likes to cook He is an amazing chef and can turn his hand to anything but he specializes in using seasonal food from the local area so the menu in his restaurant changes all through the year. Who he/she cooks for Obviously, he cooks for his customers but last month, it was my mum's birthday and all the family came to our house. My uncle cooked a feast for everyone and I helped him prepare it. I was so tired by the end but the food he made was amazing and everyone commented on how great it was. And explain why he/she likes cooking While I was helping him, I asked him why he enjoyed it so much and he told me that he felt he could use his creativity. He said the most fun he had was when he took traditional recipes and adapted them so he could experiment with flavors. I was really impressed.
我要谈谈我的叔叔,他是一名职业厨师。 他已经干了十来年了,在城里有自己的餐馆。 他是一名出色的厨师,什么菜都能做,但他擅长使用当地的时令食物,所以他餐厅的菜单一年四季都在变。 当然,他是为顾客做饭,但上个月是我妈妈的生日,全家人都来我家做客。叔叔为大家做了一桌丰盛的菜肴,我帮他准备。最后我累得不行,但他做的菜非常棒,每个人都夸他做的菜很棒。 在帮他做饭的时候,我问他为什么这么喜欢做饭,他告诉我他觉得可以发挥自己的创造力。他说,最有趣的是他把传统食谱加以改良,这样他就可以尝试各种口味。我真的很感动。
高分词汇
  • professional cook
    职业厨师
  • amazing chef
    出色的厨师
  • specialize in
    擅长
  • seasonal food
    时令食品
  • local area
    本地区域
  • cook a feast
    烹制一顿盛宴
  • creativity
    创造力
  • traditional recipes
    传统食谱
  • adapt
    改编
  • experiment with flavors
    尝试各种风味
范例
The person who comes to mind when thinking about someone who loves to cook for others is my Aunt Lily. She's a homemaker by choice and a chef at heart, renowned in our family for her culinary expertise. Aunt Lily particularly enjoys cooking traditional Chinese dishes, from scrumptious dumplings to succulent Peking duck. However, what makes her kitchen endeavors stand out are her inventive fusions of Eastern and Western cuisines, such as stir-frying spaghetti with Szechuan pepper and garlic. What fuels her passion for cooking is twofold. First, she derives immense satisfaction from the act of creating something delicious from scratch. She often says that cooking is like painting on a blank canvas, where spices are her colors and the plate is her masterpiece. Second, her joy is magnified when she sees the smiles and hears the compliments from those who savor her dishes. To her, cooking is more than a hobby; it's a medium of love and connection, a way to bring people together and create lasting memories.
当我想到喜欢为别人做饭的人时,我想到的是我的姨妈Lily。她是一个家庭主妇,也是一位出色的厨师,因其烹饪技巧在我们家族中非常有名。 Lily姨妈特别喜欢做传统的中餐,从美味的饺子到多汁的北京烤鸭。然而,让她的厨房成就脱颖而出的是她将东西方美食进行创新性的融合,比如用四川辣椒和大蒜炒意大利面。 她对烹饪的热情有两个方面。首先,她从零开始创造出美味的食物,从中获得了巨大的满足感。她经常说,烹饪就像在空白的画布上绘画,调料是她的颜色,而盘子就是她的杰作。其次,当她看到那些品尝她菜肴的人的笑容和听到他们的赞美时,她的快乐就倍增了。对她来说,烹饪不仅仅是一种爱好,它是一种爱和联系的媒介,是一种将人们聚集在一起并创造持久记忆的方式。
语法分析
复杂句和简单句结合: "What fuels her passion for cooking is twofold," 这个句子采用了主从复合句。 时态运用恰当: 主要使用了一般现在时来描述人物和喜好。例如:"She's a homemaker by choice and a chef at heart." 表达层次感: 通过使用 "particularly," "however," "such as," 答案展示了表达的层次和深度。 修饰词和形容词的巧妙使用: 诸如 "immense satisfaction," "stand out," 和 "twofold" 等表达方式增加了答案的丰富性和精确性。 逻辑连贯性和结构清晰: 通过使用 "First," "Second," "To her," 答案确保了逻辑和结构的清晰性。
高分词汇
  • Homemaker
    家庭主妇
  • Culinary expertise
    烹饪技巧
  • Scrumptious
    美味的
  • Succulent
    多汁的
  • Endeavors
    努力、成就
  • Inventive fusions
    创新性的融合
  • Derives
    获得
  • Magnified
    倍增
  • Medium
    媒介