7 分范例

问题: Have you ever watched a sports game in a stadium?

思路 1

Yes
是
考官答案
Yes, I have. Last year, I went to a football match with my friends. The stadium was really lively and it was exciting to cheer for our team together. I also liked eating snacks there. It was much more fun than watching on TV.
是的，我去过。去年，我和朋友们一起去看了一场足球比赛。体育场气氛非常热烈，一起为我们的球队加油非常激动人心。我也喜欢在那里吃零食。比起在电视上观看，要有趣得多。
Yes, I have watched a sports game in a stadium before. Last year, I went to a football match with some friends. The atmosphere was electric and it was amazing to cheer for my favorite team with such a big crowd. The whole experience, including the snacks and the energy, was totally different from just watching it on TV.
是的，我以前曾在体育场观看过一场体育比赛。去年，我和一些朋友去看了一场足球比赛。氛围非常热烈，能和这么多人一起为我喜欢的球队加油，感觉非常棒。整个经历，包括零食和现场的能量，与仅仅在电视上观看完全不同。
语法分析
1. 现在完成时：“I have watched a sports game in a stadium before” 使用现在完成时来谈论生活经历，这在此语境下是合适的。 2. 一般过去时：“Last year, I went to a football match...” 正确地切换到一般过去时来描述过去的具体事件。 3. 描述性从句的使用：“including the snacks and the energy” 增加了细节，使回答更生动。
高分词汇
  • atmosphere was electric
    气氛非常激烈
  • cheer for my favorite team
    为我最喜欢的球队加油
  • with such a big crowd
    人这么多
  • totally different from just watching it on TV
    和在电视上看完全不同

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I haven’t. I’ve never had the chance to go to a stadium because tickets are usually expensive and hard to get. I usually just watch sports at home, which is more comfortable for me.
不，我没有。我从来没有机会去体育场，因为票通常很贵而且很难买到。我通常只在家看体育比赛，这对我来说更舒服。
No, I’ve never watched a sports game in a stadium. To be honest, I’ve never really had the opportunity, since tickets are often expensive or difficult to buy. Plus, I actually prefer watching sports at home where I can relax and enjoy the game in comfort.
不，我从来没有在体育场观看过体育比赛。说实话，我其实从未有过这样的机会，因为门票通常很贵或很难买到。而且，我其实更喜欢在家观看体育比赛，这样我可以放松并舒适地享受比赛。
语法分析
1. 现在完成时：“I’ve never watched”和“I’ve never really had”使用现在完成时来谈论迄今为止的人生经历，这对于这类问题是合适的。 2. 连词的使用：“since”引出原因，“Plus”用于以对话的方式添加另一个观点，使答案听起来自然流畅。
高分词汇
  • opportunity
    机会
  • expensive
    昂贵
  • difficult to buy
    难买
  • prefer watching sports at home
    更喜欢在家观看体育比赛
  • in comfort
    安逸地
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