7 分范例

问题: Are there any differences between what you do in the evening now and what you did in the past?

思路 1

Yes, there are differences
是的,存在差异
考官答案
Yes, there are some differences. Now, I usually spend my evenings on my phone, watching videos or chatting with friends online. In the past, I used to do homework or play outside with my friends. My routine changed a lot after I started university.
是的,有一些不同。现在,我通常晚上用手机,看视频或和朋友在线聊天。以前,我常常做作业或和朋友们在外面玩。自从上大学后,我的日常生活发生了很大变化。
Yes, my evening routine has definitely changed over the years. These days, I spend a lot more time on my phone or computer, either watching videos or chatting with friends online. When I was younger, I used to play outside with my friends or do homework in the evenings. Now, because of my university schedule, I often have to work late or attend online meetings, so my evenings are much busier than before.
是的,多年来我的晚间习惯确实发生了变化。现在,我花更多时间在手机或电脑上,要么看视频,要么在网上与朋友聊天。我小时候,晚上通常会和朋友们一起在外面玩,或者做作业。现在,由于大学的课程安排,我经常需要加班或参加在线会议,所以我的晚上比以前忙得多。
语法分析
1. 现在完成时的使用:“has definitely changed over the years” 表示从过去到现在的变化,是现在完成时的很好用法。 2. “used to”的使用:“used to play outside... or do homework” 正确表达了不再发生的过去习惯。 3. 比较结构:“much busier than before” 使用比较级突出过去和现在日常生活的差异。
高分词汇
  • evening routine
    晚间例行公事
  • watching videos
    观看视频
  • chatting with friends online
    和朋友在线聊天
  • used to
    过去常常
  • work late
    加班
  • attend online meetings
    参加在线会议
  • busier than before
    比以前更忙

思路 2

Not really, things are similar
不完全是,情况类似
考官答案
Not really, my evenings are pretty much the same as before. I still like to relax by reading or watching TV, and I spend time with my family most nights.
不太一样,我的晚上和以前差不多。我仍然喜欢通过阅读或看电视来放松,大多数晚上我都会和家人共度时光。
Actually, there aren’t many differences. I still enjoy relaxing in the evenings, maybe by reading a book or watching TV, just like I did in the past. Spending time with my family in the evening is still really important to me, so my routine hasn’t changed much.
实际上,没有太多不同。我仍然喜欢晚上放松,可能是读书或看电视,就像过去一样。晚上和家人共度时光对我来说仍然非常重要,所以我的日常生活没有太大变化。
语法分析
1. 一般现在时:答案使用了一般现在时(“I still enjoy”,“is still really important”)来描述当前的习惯和日常,这在此语境中是恰当的。 2. 一般过去时:“just like I did in the past”使用了一般过去时来指代过去的习惯,显示了过去和现在的明显对比。 3. 动名词短语:“relaxing in the evenings”,“reading a book or watching TV”,以及“spending time with my family”都使用了动名词来描述活动,使答案更自然流畅。
高分词汇
  • relaxing in the evenings
    晚上放松
  • reading a book
    读一本书
  • watching TV
    看电视
  • spending time with my family
    与家人共度时光
  • routine hasn’t changed much
    日常生活没什么变化