7 分范例

问题: What do you do when you see rubbish on the street?

思路 1

Pick it up and throw it away
捡起来扔掉
考官答案
If I see rubbish on the street and there’s a bin nearby, I usually pick it up and throw it away. I think it’s important to keep the city clean and set a good example for others.
如果我看到街上有垃圾旁边又有垃圾桶,我通常会捡起来扔掉。我认为保持城市清洁并为他人树立好榜样非常重要。
When I notice rubbish on the street, I usually pick it up and throw it away if there’s a bin nearby. I care about keeping my city clean and feel a sense of responsibility for the environment. Plus, I think it sets a good example for others to follow.
当我注意到街上的垃圾时,如果附近有垃圾桶,我通常会捡起来扔掉。我关心保持我的城市清洁,也感受到对环境的责任感。此外,我认为这为他人树立了一个好榜样。
语法分析
1. 一般现在时:答案使用一般现在时(“I notice”,“I usually pick it up”,“I care”,“I think”)来描述常规动作和观点,这在此语境中是合适的。 2. 条件从句:“if there’s a bin nearby”是第一条件句,展示了自然使用条件结构的能力。 3. 表示目的的不定式:“to follow”在“for others to follow”中展示了用不定式表达目的。
高分词汇
  • pick it up and throw it away
    捡起来扔掉
  • keeping my city clean
    保持我的城市清洁
  • sense of responsibility for the environment
    环境责任感
  • sets a good example
    树立了好榜样

思路 2

Ignore it
忽略它
考官答案
Sometimes I just ignore rubbish on the street, especially if I’m in a hurry or if it looks dirty. I think it’s the job of the cleaners to take care of it.
有时候我会忽略街上的垃圾,尤其是当我很赶时间或者看到它很脏的时候。我认为清洁工负责处理这些。
To be honest, I sometimes ignore rubbish on the street, especially if I’m rushing somewhere or if the rubbish looks really dirty or dangerous. In my mind, it’s usually the responsibility of city workers to deal with it.
说实话,我有时会忽视街上的垃圾,尤其是当我赶时间或者垃圾看起来非常脏或危险的时候。在我看来,通常是城市工作人员的责任来处理这些垃圾。
语法分析
1. 频率副词的使用:“sometimes” 表示说话者的习惯或倾向,这是英语口语中表达频率的自然方式。 2. 条件句的使用:“especially if I’m rushing somewhere or if the rubbish looks really dirty or dangerous” 使用 “if” 引入条件,使答案更加细致和具体。
高分词汇
  • ignore rubbish
    忽略垃圾
  • rushing somewhere
    匆忙赶路
  • dirty or dangerous
    肮脏或危险
  • responsibility of city workers
    城市工作者的责任

思路 3

Report it
举报
考官答案
If there’s a lot of rubbish, I might report it to the local authorities. I don’t always want to touch it myself, but I still want to help.
如果有很多垃圾,我可能会向当地有关部门举报。我并不总是想自己动手,但我仍然想帮忙。
If I see a lot of rubbish in one place, I might report it to the local authorities. Some cities even have apps for reporting litter, which makes it easier to help out without having to touch it myself.
如果我看到某个地方有很多垃圾,我可能会向当地有关部门举报。有些城市甚至有举报垃圾的应用程序,这让人们更容易帮助清理,而不必亲自接触垃圾。
语法分析
1. 第一条件句:“If I see a lot of rubbish in one place, I might report it...” 这使用第一条件句来谈论未来可能的行动,显示了语法的灵活性。 2. 关系从句:“which makes it easier to help out without having to touch it myself” 使用关系从句来补充有关应用程序的额外信息,使回答更复杂且自然。
高分词汇
  • report it to the local authorities
    向当地 authorities 报告
  • apps for reporting litter
    报告垃圾的应用程序
  • help out
    帮忙
  • without having to touch it myself
    无需我亲自触碰它