7 分范例

问题: How did you learn to be polite as a child?

思路 1

From Parents
来自家长
考官答案
I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They always told me to say 'please' and 'thank you', and if I forgot, they would remind me. They also acted politely themselves, so I followed their example.
我主要是从父母那里学会了礼貌。他们总是告诉我要说“请”和“谢谢”,如果我忘了,他们会提醒我。他们自己也表现得很有礼貌,所以我就以他们为榜样。
I learned to be polite mostly from my parents. They always reminded me to say 'please' and 'thank you', and they set a really good example by being polite themselves. Politeness was a big part of our family values, so it just became second nature to me.
我从父母那里学会了礼貌。他们总是提醒我要说“请”和“谢谢”,并且他们自己也以礼貌为榜样。礼貌是我们家庭价值观的重要部分,所以这对我来说变得自然而然。
语法分析
1. 过去时:答案使用了简单过去时(“learned”,“reminded”,“set”)来讲述童年经历,这适合描述过去的事件。 2. 复合句:答案使用了“and”和“so”等连词来连接观点,使回答更加流畅自然。
高分词汇
  • set a really good example
    树立一个真正的好榜样
  • family values
    家庭价值观
  • second nature
    第二天性

思路 2

From School
来自学校
考官答案
At school, my teachers taught us about good manners. We had rules about how to treat each other, and sometimes we did role-plays to practice being polite.
在学校里,老师教我们良好的礼仪。我们有关于如何相互对待的规则,有时我们会进行角色扮演来练习礼貌。
I also learned a lot about politeness at school. Our teachers would teach us about good manners, and we even had role-plays in class to practice how to be polite in different situations. It really helped me understand how important it is to treat others with respect.
我在学校也学到了很多关于礼貌的知识。我们的老师会教我们良好的礼仪,我们甚至在课堂上进行角色扮演,练习在不同情况下如何表现得有礼貌。这真的帮助我理解了尊重他人是多么重要。
语法分析
1. 过去时的使用:答案使用了简单过去时(“learned”,“would teach”,“had”)来描述童年的经历,这对于谈论过去是合适的。 2. 情态动词“would”:在“Our teachers would teach us”中使用“would”表示过去的重复动作或习惯,这是一种更高级的语法结构。
高分词汇
  • good manners
    良好礼仪
  • role-plays
    角色扮演
  • treat others with respect
    尊重他人

思路 3

From Society and Media
来自社会与媒体
考官答案
I learned some polite habits from watching TV shows and cartoons. The characters were always polite, and I wanted to be like them. Also, I saw adults being polite in public.
我从观看电视剧和动画片中学到了一些礼貌习惯。角色们总是很有礼貌,我也想像他们一样。此外,我还看到成年人在公共场合表现得很有礼貌。
Society and media played a role too. I picked up polite habits by watching how adults behaved in public and from TV shows and cartoons, which often had polite characters. Even the stories and books I read as a kid usually had heroes who were polite, so I tried to copy them.
社会和媒体也起到了作用。我通过观察成年人在公共场合的行为以及电视节目和卡通片学到了礼貌习惯,这些节目中经常有礼貌的角色。甚至我小时候读的故事和书籍里,通常都有礼貌的英雄,所以我试着模仿他们。
语法分析
1. 过去时态:答案使用了过去简单时态(“played”,“picked up”,“watched”,“read”,“tried”)来描述童年的经历,这对于问题来说是合适的。 2. 关系从句的使用:“heroes who were polite”这一短语使用了关系从句,来补充说明故事和书中的英雄。
高分词汇
  • picked up polite habits
    养成了礼貌习惯
  • polite characters
    彬彬有礼的字符
  • heroes who were polite
    有礼貌的英雄
  • copy them
    复制它们

思路 4

From Experience
从经验中
考官答案
Sometimes I learned to be polite from my own experience. If I was rude, people would correct me, and I realized it was better to be polite. Also, when I was polite, people were nicer to me.
有时我通过自己的经验学会了礼貌。如果我粗鲁,人们会纠正我,我意识到礼貌更好。而且,当我有礼貌时,人们对我更友好。
A lot of my learning came from experience. For example, when I made mistakes and someone corrected me, I realized how important manners are. I also noticed that when I was polite, people treated me better, so I made an effort to keep it up. Seeing others being rude also made me want to avoid acting that way.
我很多学习都来自于经验。例如,当我犯错误有人纠正我时,我意识到了礼貌的重要性。我还注意到,当我有礼貌时,人们会更好地对待我,所以我努力保持这种行为。看到别人粗鲁的表现也让我想避免那样做。
语法分析
1. 使用过去简单时态:答案使用了过去简单时态("came"、"made"、"corrected"、"realized"、"noticed")来描述过去的经历,这对于谈论童年是合适的。 2. 使用条件和结果从句:答案中使用了"when I was polite, people treated me better",展示了因果关系。同时,"so I made an effort to keep it up" 使用结果从句来解释前一动作的结果。
高分词汇
  • experience
    经验
  • corrected me
    纠正我
  • manners
    礼貌
  • treated me better
    对我更好
  • keep it up
    继续加油
  • rude
    粗鲁