7 分范例

问题: Do people still keep handwritten letters today?

思路 1

Yes, some people do
是的，有些人确实如此
考官答案
Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters. They feel more special than messages on the phone, and sometimes people keep them as memories, especially if they are from family or close friends.
是的，有些人仍然保留手写信件。他们觉得这些信件比手机上的信息更特别，有时人们会将它们作为回忆保存，特别是当这些信件来自家人或亲密的朋友时。
Yes, there are still people who keep handwritten letters these days. They feel much more personal and meaningful than digital messages, so people often save them as souvenirs, especially if they're from loved ones or for special occasions like birthdays.
是的，现在仍有人保存手写信件。它们比数字消息感觉更个人化、更有意义，因此人们常常将其作为纪念品保存，特别是如果信件来自亲人或是用于生日等特殊场合。
语法分析
1. 一般现在时：答案使用了一般现在时（“there are still people who keep...”，“They feel...”，“people often save them...”）来描述一般习惯和事实，这对于这类问题是合适的。 2. 比较级的使用：“much more personal and meaningful than digital messages”这句话使用了比较级，突出手写信和数字消息之间的差异。
高分词汇
  • personal and meaningful
    个人且有意义
  • souvenirs
    纪念品
  • loved ones
    亲人
  • special occasions
    特殊场合

思路 2

Not as much as before
没以前那么多了
考官答案
Not many people keep handwritten letters now. Most people use their phones or email because it's faster and easier. Young people especially don't write or keep letters anymore.
现在很少有人保留手写信件了。大多数人使用手机或电子邮件，因为这样更快更方便。尤其是年轻人，不再写信或保存信件。
Not as much as before, to be honest. Most people prefer texting or emailing these days because it's so much quicker and more convenient. Handwritten letters have become quite rare, especially among younger generations.
说实话，没有以前那么多了。现在大多数人更喜欢发短信或发电子邮件，因为这样更快更方便。手写信件变得相当罕见，尤其是在年轻一代中。
语法分析
1. 比较结构：答案使用了比较级形式如“quicker and more convenient”来比较现代通讯和手写信件。 2. 现在完成时：“Handwritten letters have become quite rare”使用了现在完成时来描述时间上的变化，显示出考生能灵活使用时态。
高分词汇
  • quicker and more convenient
    更快更方便
  • rare
    稀有
  • younger generations
    年轻一代
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