7 分范例

问题: Were there any kind of fruits and vegetables you disliked as a child?

思路 1

Yes
是
考官答案
Yes, when I was a kid, I really didn't like bitter melon because it tasted too strong and bitter for me. I also hated tomatoes because of the seeds and the weird texture.
是的，当我还是个孩子的时候，我真的不喜欢苦瓜，因为味道对我来说太浓烈和苦涩了。我也讨厌西红柿，因为里面有籽，口感也很怪异。
Yes, as a child, I really disliked bitter melon because of its strong, bitter taste. I also wasn't a fan of tomatoes, mainly because of their texture and all the seeds inside. I remember always picking them out of my food!
是的，小时候我非常不喜欢苦瓜，因为它味道又浓又苦。我也不喜欢西红柿，主要是因为它的质地和里面的很多种子。我记得我总是把种子从食物里挑出来！
语法分析
1. 过去时：答案正确使用了过去时（"disliked," "wasn't a fan," "remember"）来谈论童年经历，这对于问题来说是合适的。 2. 因果关系："because of" 和 "mainly because of" 的使用清楚地解释了不喜欢的原因，显示了很好地使用连接词进行说明。
高分词汇
  • disliked
    不喜欢
  • bitter melon
    苦瓜
  • wasn't a fan of
    不喜欢
  • texture
    纹理
  • picking them out of my food
    把它们从我的食物里挑出来

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I actually liked most fruits and vegetables when I was young. My parents always encouraged me to try different things, so I got used to the tastes early on.
不，实际上我小时候大多数水果和蔬菜都喜欢吃。我的父母总是鼓励我尝试不同的东西，所以我很早就习惯了各种味道。
No, I wasn't a picky eater as a child. My parents encouraged me to try all kinds of fruits and vegetables, so I got used to different tastes from a young age and actually enjoyed eating them.
不，我小时候不是个挑食的孩子。我的父母鼓励我尝试各种各样的水果和蔬菜，所以我从小就习惯了不同的口味，实际上也喜欢吃它们。
语法分析
1. 一般过去时：答案使用了一般过去时（"wasn't"、"encouraged"、"got used to"、"enjoyed"）来谈论童年经历，适合描述过去的习惯和行为。 2. 复杂的句子结构：使用 "so" 连接两个分句，表示因果关系，使答案更连贯和自然。
高分词汇
  • picky eater
    挑食者
  • encouraged me to try
    鼓励我去尝试
  • got used to
    习惯于
  • different tastes
    不同的口味
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