7 分范例

问题: Do people in your country usually obey the law?

思路 1

Mostly Yes
大多数情况下是的
考官答案
Yes, I think most people in my country do obey the law. People are taught from a young age by their parents and teachers to follow rules and respect the law. Also, there are strict punishments if you break the law, so most people are careful and want to avoid getting into trouble. Being a good citizen is important to many people here.
是的,我认为我国大多数人都遵守法律。父母和老师从小就教育人们遵守规则,尊重法律。另外,如果你违法,会有严厉的惩罚,所以大多数人都很小心,想避免惹麻烦。做一个好公民对这里的许多人来说很重要。
Generally speaking, most people in my country do follow the law. From childhood, we're taught by parents and teachers to respect rules and behave properly. Plus, the penalties for breaking the law can be quite severe, so people tend to be cautious. Obeying the law is also seen as a sign of being a responsible citizen, so there's a kind of social pressure to do the right thing.
一般来说,我国大多数人遵守法律。从小,父母和老师就教导我们尊重规则,行为得当。此外,违法的处罚可能相当严厉,所以人们往往会小心谨慎。遵守法律也被视为负责任公民的标志,因此有一种社会压力促使人们做正确的事情。
语法分析
1. 一般现在时:贯穿整个答案使用(例如,“most people...do follow the law”,“we're taught”,“people tend to be cautious”),用来表达普遍真理和习惯。 2. 被动语态:“We're taught by parents and teachers”使用被动结构,这是一种很好的方式来变化句型,强调动作而非执行者。 3. 情态动词:“can be quite severe”和“tend to be cautious”使用情态动词来表达可能性和倾向,使答案更有层次感。 4. 复合句:答案使用“plus”和“so”等连接词来平滑连接观点,体现了对复合句结构的良好掌握。
高分词汇
  • generally speaking
    一般来说
  • follow the law
    遵守法律
  • respect rules
    遵守规则
  • behave properly
    举止得当
  • penalties
    处罚
  • breaking the law
    违法行为
  • quite severe
    相当严重
  • responsible citizen
    负责任的公民
  • social pressure
    社会压力
  • do the right thing
    正确行事

思路 2

Sometimes No
有时不是
考官答案
But of course, not everyone always obeys the law. Some people break small rules, like crossing the street when the light is red or not wearing a helmet on a bike. In busy cities, people sometimes ignore the rules to save time, especially if they think no one is watching. Also, some people think certain laws are too strict or not necessary, so they don't always follow them.
但当然,并不是所有人总是遵守法律。有些人会违反一些小规则,比如红灯时过马路或骑自行车不戴头盔。在繁忙的城市里,人们有时为了节省时间会忽视规则,尤其是当他们认为没有人看到的时候。此外,有些人认为某些法律过于严格或不必要,所以他们并不总是遵守。
However, it's not uncommon for people to break minor laws from time to time. For example, jaywalking or riding a bike without a helmet are pretty common, especially in big cities where people are always in a rush. Sometimes, people feel that certain laws are overly strict or unnecessary, so they might choose to ignore them if they believe they won't get caught. It's more about convenience than a lack of respect for the law itself.
然而,人们偶尔违反一些小法律并不罕见。例如,随意横穿马路或骑自行车不戴头盔在大城市中非常常见,因为人们总是很匆忙。有时候,人们觉得某些法律过于严苛或不必要,所以如果他们认为不会被抓到,可能会选择忽视这些法律。这更多是出于便利,而不是对法律本身缺乏尊重。
语法分析
1. 使用含糊其辞的语言:“it's not uncommon”和“from time to time”这样的短语使陈述更柔和,不那么绝对,更加细致,这是口语英语中的一个优点。 2. 现在进行时:“where people are always in a rush”使用现在进行时来描述习惯性的动作,这在口语英语中很自然。 3. 条件从句:“if they believe they won't get caught”是第一条件句,展示了因果关系,并增加了句子的复杂性。 4. 比较结构:“It's more about convenience than a lack of respect for the law itself”使用比较结构来阐明行为的主要原因,这是一种解释观点的复杂方式。
高分词汇
  • break minor laws
    违反次要法律
  • jaywalking
    闯红灯穿马路
  • riding a bike without a helmet
    骑自行车不戴头盔
  • overly strict
    过于严格
  • unnecessary
    不必要的
  • ignore them
    忽略它们
  • won't get caught
    不会被抓到
  • convenience
    便利
  • lack of respect for the law
    对法律缺乏尊重