7 分范例

问题: Is it good to reward children too often? Why?

思路 1

No, it’s not good to reward children too often
不,经常奖励孩子并不好
考官答案
I don’t think it’s good to reward children too often. If kids get a prize every time they do something, they will start to expect it and might not want to do anything unless there’s a reward. This can make rewards less special and children might not learn to be responsible or work hard on their own. For example, if a child always gets candy for finishing homework, they might refuse to study if there’s no candy.
我认为不宜过于频繁地奖励孩子。如果孩子每次做了什么事情都能得到奖品,他们会开始期待这些奖励,可能只在有奖励的情况下才愿意去做事情。这会使奖励变得不那么特别,孩子们也可能学不到自律或自主努力的重要性。例如,如果孩子每次完成作业都能得到糖果,可能在没有糖果的情况下拒绝学习。
No, I don’t believe it’s a good idea to reward children too frequently. When children are constantly given rewards, they can become dependent on them and may only do things if there’s a prize involved. This reduces the value of the reward and can undermine their intrinsic motivation. Over time, they might not develop important qualities like self-discipline or responsibility. For instance, if a child receives candy every time they complete their homework, they may eventually refuse to study unless there’s a treat waiting for them.
不,我不认为频繁奖励孩子是个好主意。当孩子们不断得到奖励时,他们可能会依赖这些奖励,只有在有奖品的情况下才会去做事情。这降低了奖励的价值,并可能削弱他们的内在动力。随着时间的推移,他们可能无法培养诸如自律或责任感等重要品质。例如,如果孩子每次完成作业都会得到糖果,他们最终可能会拒绝学习,除非有奖励在等待着他们。
语法分析
- 条件句:"If a child receives candy every time they complete their homework, they may eventually refuse to study unless there’s a treat waiting for them." - 用于推测的情态动词:"may only do things," "can become dependent," "might not develop" - 用于表达普遍真理的现在时:"This reduces the value of the reward," "they can become dependent" - 被动语态:"are constantly given rewards"
高分词汇
  • reward
    奖励
  • give incentives
    给予激励
  • offer prizes
    提供奖品
  • provide treats
    提供零食
  • grant recognition
    授予认可
  • children
    儿童
  • youngsters
    年轻人
  • kids
    孩子们
  • minors
    未成年人
  • too often
    太频繁了
  • excessively
    过度地
  • frequently
    经常
  • dependency
    依赖
  • intrinsic motivation
    内在动机
  • self-discipline
    自律
  • responsibility
    责任
  • undermine
    破坏
  • reduce the value
    降低价值
  • external incentives
    外部激励

思路 2

Sometimes, but with limits
有时,但有限制
考官答案
I think it’s okay to reward children sometimes, but not all the time. Giving a reward once in a while can make kids feel happy and encourage them to do better. But if they get rewards for everything, it’s not special anymore. It’s better to give rewards for big achievements, like getting good grades or helping someone, instead of for everyday things.
我认为有时候奖励孩子是可以的,但不能一直都奖励。偶尔给予奖励可以让孩子感到开心,激励他们做得更好。但如果什么事情都奖励,奖励就不再特别了。最好是对重大成就给予奖励,比如取得好成绩或帮助别人,而不是对日常的小事。
I believe occasional rewards are fine, as long as there are clear limits. When children are recognized for special achievements, it can boost their motivation and make them feel appreciated. However, rewards should be reserved for significant efforts, not for routine tasks. For example, giving a reward for excellent grades or for showing kindness to others is much more meaningful than rewarding them for simply doing their homework every day.
我认为偶尔的奖励是可以的,只要有明确的限制。当孩子因为特殊成就而受到认可时,这可以激发他们的积极性,让他们感到被重视。然而,奖励应该用于重大努力,而不是日常任务。例如,因优异成绩或对他人的善意而给予奖励,比每天完成作业都给予奖励要有意义得多。
语法分析
1. 条件结构:“as long as there are clear limits” 使用条件从句来设定界限,显示出高级的句子结构。 2. 被动语态:“When children are recognized for special achievements” 使用被动语态,强调孩子而不是给予表彰的人。 3. 对比结构:“However, rewards should be reserved for significant efforts, not for routine tasks” 使用对比来阐明说话者的观点并增加深度。 4. 动名词作主语:“giving a reward for excellent grades or for showing kindness” 使用动名词作为从句的主语,展示了语法多样性。
高分词汇
  • occasional rewards
    偶尔奖励
  • clear limits
    清除限制
  • recognized
    识别的
  • special achievements
    特殊成就
  • boost their motivation
    提升他们的动力
  • feel appreciated
    感到被欣赏
  • reserved for significant efforts
    保留给重要的努力
  • routine tasks
    日常任务
  • excellent grades
    优异的成绩
  • showing kindness
    展示善意
  • meaningful
    有意义的
  • doing their homework every day
    每天做作业
  • ####
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思路 3

Yes, but use non-material rewards
是的,但使用非物质奖励。
考官答案
Yes, but I think it’s better to use non-material rewards. Saying “good job” or giving extra playtime can make children feel proud and happy. These kinds of rewards help kids learn to value effort and good behavior, not just things like toys or candy. For example, a sticker or a compliment can be enough for young children.
是的,但我认为使用非物质奖励更好。说“干得好”或给予额外的玩耍时间可以让孩子感到自豪和快乐。这些类型的奖励帮助孩子学会重视努力和良好的行为,而不仅仅是玩具或糖果。例如,一张贴纸或一句赞美对年幼的孩子来说就足够了。
Yes, but I think it’s best to focus on non-material rewards. Verbal praise, extra playtime, or even a simple sticker can be very effective in encouraging children. These types of rewards help children appreciate the value of effort and kindness, rather than just material possessions. For instance, saying “well done” or giving a child a sticker for good behavior can boost their confidence and help them develop positive habits, without making them materialistic.
是的,但我认为最好专注于非物质奖励。口头表扬、额外的游戏时间,甚至一个简单的贴纸都能在鼓励孩子方面非常有效。这些类型的奖励帮助孩子们理解努力和善良的价值,而不仅仅是物质财富。例如,说“做得好”或因良好行为给孩子一个贴纸,可以提升他们的自信心,帮助他们养成积极的习惯,而不会让他们变得物质主义。
语法分析
1. 建议的情态动词:“I think it’s best to focus on...” 使用“it’s best to”来提出建议或提供意见,表达一种礼貌且深思熟虑的语气。 2. 一般真理的现在进行时:“can be very effective in encouraging children” 使用“can be”来表达一种普遍的真理或可能性。 3. 目的不定式:“to appreciate the value of effort and kindness” 使用不定式来解释动作的目的或结果。 4. 作为形容词的现在分词:“encouraging children” 使用现在分词“encouraging”来描述奖励的效果。
高分词汇
  • non-material rewards
    非物质奖励
  • verbal praise
    口头表扬
  • extra playtime
    额外的游戏时间
  • simple sticker
    简单贴纸
  • appreciate the value of effort and kindness
    欣赏努力和善良的价值
  • material possessions
    物质财富
  • boost their confidence
    提升他们的自信心
  • develop positive habits
    培养积极的习惯
  • materialistic
    唯物主义的