7 分范例

问题: Why do most people smile in photographs?

思路 1

To Look Friendly and Attractive
看起来友好且有吸引力
考官答案
Most people smile in photos because they want to look friendly and nice. A smile makes you seem more approachable, and people usually want to look good, especially if the photo is going to be shared online or kept in a family album. Smiling also makes the picture look happier and more pleasant, so it’s more enjoyable for others to see.
大多数人在照片中微笑是因为他们想看起来友善和亲切。微笑会让你显得更容易接近,人们通常希望看起来好看,尤其是当照片将要在网上分享或保存在家庭相册中时。微笑也使照片看起来更快乐、更愉快,因此别人观看时会更开心。
People tend to smile in photographs mainly because it helps them appear more friendly and attractive. A genuine smile can make someone look much more approachable and pleasant, which is important, especially for photos that will be shared on social media or kept in family albums. Smiling also leaves a positive and memorable impression, making the photo more enjoyable for anyone who looks at it.
人们在照片中倾向于微笑,主要是因为这样可以让他们看起来更友好、更有吸引力。真诚的微笑能使人显得更加平易近人和愉快,这一点尤其重要,特别是对于那些将会分享到社交媒体或保存在家庭相册中的照片。微笑还会留下积极且令人难忘的印象,使照片对任何观看它的人来说更为愉悦。
语法分析
1. 目的不定式:“to smile in photographs” 表示动作的原因或目的。 2. 比较结构:“more friendly and attractive”,“much more approachable and pleasant” 使用比较级来强调微笑的效果。 3. 现在分词作形容词:“shared on social media”和“kept in family albums” 使用现在分词和过去分词作形容词来描述照片。 4. 一般现在时:贯穿全文,用于陈述普遍真理和习惯,例如,“People tend to smile”,“Smiling also leaves...”
高分词汇
  • appear more friendly and attractive
    显得更加友好和有吸引力
  • genuine smile
    真诚的微笑
  • approachable and pleasant
    平易近人且令人愉快
  • shared on social media
    在社交媒体上分享
  • kept in family albums
    保存在家庭相册中
  • leaves a positive and memorable impression
    留下积极而难忘的印象
  • enjoyable
    愉快的

思路 2

To Capture Happy Moments
捕捉快乐时刻
考官答案
I think people smile in photos because they are usually taken during happy times, like birthdays, holidays, or other celebrations. Smiling shows that they are enjoying the moment and want to remember it as a good time. When people look back at these photos, the smiles help them remember the happiness they felt.
我认为人们在照片中微笑是因为这些照片通常是在快乐的时刻拍摄的,比如生日、假期或其他庆祝活动。微笑表示他们正在享受当下,想要将这段美好时光铭记。当人们回看这些照片时,微笑帮助他们回忆起当时的幸福感。
People often smile in photographs because these moments are usually captured during celebrations, holidays, or other special occasions. Smiling reflects the joy and excitement of those moments, and people naturally want to remember the good times. When they look back at these photos, the smiles help them relive the positive emotions associated with those events, making the memories even more meaningful.
人们在照片中常常微笑,因为这些时刻通常是在庆祝活动、假期或其他特殊场合中捕捉到的。微笑反映了那些时刻的喜悦和兴奋,人们自然而然地想要记住美好的时光。当他们回顾这些照片时,微笑帮助他们重温与那些事件相关的积极情感,使回忆更加有意义。
语法分析
1. 一般现在时:贯穿全文使用(“People often smile”,“smiling reflects”)用于陈述普遍真理和习惯。 2. 关系从句:“because these moments are usually captured during celebrations, holidays, or other special occasions”和“associated with those events”增加了细节和复杂性。 3. 目的不定式:“to remember the good times”和“to relive the positive emotions”表明行为的原因。 4. 现在分词作主语:“Smiling reflects the joy...”使用动名词作为句子的主语。
高分词汇
  • captured
    已捕获
  • celebrations
    庆祝活动
  • special occasions
    特殊场合
  • reflects
    反映
  • joy
    欢乐
  • excitement
    兴奋
  • remember the good times
    记住美好的时光
  • look back
    回顾
  • relive
    重温
  • positive emotions
    积极情绪
  • meaningful memories
    有意义的回忆

思路 3

Social and Cultural Expectations
社会和文化期望
考官答案
Another reason is that it’s kind of expected to smile in photos. In many cultures, people are told to say “cheese” and smile when someone takes a picture. Sometimes, people feel like they have to smile because everyone else is doing it, especially in group photos.
另一个原因是拍照时微笑几乎是被期望的。在许多文化中,人们被告知拍照时要说“cheese”并微笑。有时,人们觉得自己必须微笑,因为其他人都在这样做,尤其是在团体照中。
There’s also a strong social and cultural expectation to smile in photographs. In many societies, it’s almost automatic for photographers to ask people to say “cheese,” which encourages everyone to smile. People often feel a subtle pressure to smile because it’s become the norm, especially in group pictures. This expectation has made smiling for the camera a widespread habit, regardless of how people actually feel at the moment.
在许多社会中,人们在拍照时被强烈的社会和文化期望微笑。摄影师几乎会自然而然地要求人们说“cheese”,这促使大家都微笑。人们常常感受到一种微妙的压力去微笑,因为这已经成为一种常态,尤其是在团体照片中。这种期望使得人们无论当时的真实感受如何,拍照时微笑成为一种普遍的习惯。
语法分析
1. 被动语态:“摄影师几乎自动会让人们说‘cheese’,这促使每个人微笑。”被动语态和定语从句的使用增加了句子的复杂性。 2. 名词短语作主语:“A strong social and cultural expectation”和“this expectation”被用作主语,显示出高级的句子结构。 3. 现在完成时:“has made smiling for the camera a widespread habit”使用现在完成时来表示随时间的变化。 4. 状语从句:“regardless of how people actually feel at the moment”是一个提供额外信息的状语从句。
高分词汇
  • social and cultural expectation
    社会和文化期望
  • automatic
    自动
  • encourages
    鼓励
  • subtle pressure
    微妙的压力
  • norm
    规范
  • group pictures
    集体照
  • widespread habit
    普遍习惯
  • regardless of how people actually feel
    无论人们实际感受如何