7 分范例

问题: Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, I have liked drawing since I was a child. My parents sent me to art classes when I was young, and I still draw pictures in my free time. Drawing helps me relax, and sometimes I give my drawings to my friends as gifts.
是的，我从小就喜欢画画。我的父母在我小时候送我去上美术课，我现在仍然在空闲时间画画。画画帮助我放松，有时我会把画作送给朋友作为礼物。
Yes, I’ve loved drawing ever since I was a child. My parents encouraged me to take art classes when I was young, and drawing has always helped me relax and express my feelings. I still draw in my free time, and sometimes I even give my artwork as gifts to friends. Over the years, I’ve improved a lot and have even participated in school art competitions.
是的，我从小就喜欢画画。我的父母鼓励我小时候参加美术课，画画一直帮助我放松和表达我的感受。我仍然在空闲时间画画，有时甚至把我的作品作为礼物送给朋友。多年来，我进步了很多，甚至参加过学校的美术比赛。
语法分析
1. 现在完成时：“I’ve loved drawing ever since I was a child”和“I’ve improved a lot”展示了现在完成时用于描述从过去开始一直持续到现在的动作或状态。 2. 一般过去时：“My parents encouraged me to take art classes when I was young”使用了一般过去时来描述过去已经完成的动作。 3. 一般现在时：“drawing has always helped me relax and express my feelings”和“I still draw in my free time”使用一般现在时来描述习惯和普遍真理。 4. 副词短语的使用：“ever since I was a child”，“in my free time”和“over the years”为句子增添了细节和时间参考。
高分词汇
  • loved drawing ever since I was a child
    我从小就喜欢画画
  • encouraged me to take art classes
    鼓励我参加艺术课程
  • helped me relax and express my feelings
    帮助我放松并表达我的感受
  • give my artwork as gifts
    把我的艺术作品作为礼物赠送
  • improved a lot
    提高了很多
  • participated in school art competitions
    参加学校艺术比赛

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I don’t have a hobby from childhood. When I was a kid, I liked collecting stamps, but now I don’t do that anymore. My hobbies have changed, and now I prefer playing sports or listening to music.
不，我小时候没有爱好。小时候，我喜欢收集邮票，但现在我不再做这件事了。我的爱好发生了变化，现在我更喜欢运动或听音乐。
No, I don’t have a hobby that I’ve kept since childhood. My interests have changed as I’ve grown older. For example, I used to enjoy collecting stamps and toys when I was a child, but now I’m more interested in playing sports and listening to music. I think it’s natural for people’s hobbies to change as they get older, and I like to try new things rather than stick to just one hobby for a long time.
不，我没有从小坚持下来的爱好。随着年龄的增长，我的兴趣也发生了变化。例如，我小时候喜欢收集邮票和玩具，但现在我更喜欢运动和听音乐。我认为人们的爱好随着年龄的增长而改变是很自然的，我喜欢尝试新的事物，而不是长时间执着于某一种爱好。
语法分析
1. 现在完成时：“I don’t have a hobby that I’ve kept since childhood.” 现在完成时（“I’ve kept”）用于描述一个从过去开始并持续到现在的动作，显示了良好的时态掌握。 2. 一般过去时和一般现在时：答案流畅地在一般过去时（“I used to enjoy...when I was a child”）和一般现在时（“now I’m more interested...”）之间转换，清晰地展示了时间变化。 3. 不定式和动名词的使用：“to try new things”（不定式）和“playing sports and listening to music”（动名词）展示了句子结构的灵活性。 4. 比较结构：“rather than stick to just one hobby for a long time”使用比较短语表达偏好。
高分词汇
  • kept since childhood
    自童年起保持
  • my interests have changed
    我的兴趣已经发生了变化
  • used to enjoy
    曾经喜欢
  • collecting stamps and toys
    收集邮票和玩具
  • more interested in
    更感兴趣于
  • natural for people’s hobbies to change
    人们的爱好变化是很自然的
  • try new things
    尝试新事物
  • stick to just one hobby
    只坚持一个爱好
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