7 分范例
话题: Describe a time when you broke something
范例
An accidental mishap What it was I'm going to talk about a time when I accidentally broke my friend's favorite vase. It was a beautiful, antique porcelain vase that had been passed down through her family for generations. When/where that happened This unfortunate incident happened about a year ago at my friend's house. We were having a small get-together to celebrate her birthday, and she had invited a few close friends over for dinner. How you broke it The accident occurred when I was helping to set the table for dinner. I was carrying a tray of glasses to the dining room when I tripped over the edge of a rug. In an attempt to regain my balance, I inadvertently swung my arm and knocked the vase off the side table. It fell to the floor and shattered into countless pieces. I was horrified and immediately felt a wave of guilt wash over me. And explain what you did after that After the initial shock, I quickly apologized to my friend and offered to replace the vase. She was understandably upset but was gracious enough to assure me that it was an accident and that she didn't hold it against me. I insisted on making amends, so the next day, I went to an antique shop and found a similar vase that I thought she would like. I also wrote her a heartfelt note expressing my regret and appreciation for her understanding. When I gave her the new vase, she was touched by the gesture and assured me that our friendship was far more valuable than any object. This experience taught me the importance of being careful and the value of true friendship, as my friend was incredibly forgiving and understanding despite the mishap.
一次意外事故 事情经过 我要讲的是我不小心打破了我朋友最喜欢的花瓶的那次经历。那是一个漂亮的古董瓷瓶,已经在她家族中传了好几代。 发生时间和地点 这件不幸的事情发生在大约一年前,在我朋友家里。我们当时正在举办一个小型聚会,庆祝她的生日,她邀请了几位亲密的朋友来共进晚餐。 你是如何打破它的 事故发生在我帮忙摆餐桌的时候。我正端着一托盘杯子走向餐厅,结果绊到了地毯的边缘。为了保持平衡,我不小心挥动了手臂,碰倒了放在边桌上的花瓶。花瓶掉到地上,摔成了无数碎片。我当时非常震惊,立刻感到一阵内疚。 事后你做了什么 在最初的震惊过后,我迅速向朋友道歉,并主动提出赔偿花瓶。她显然很难过,但宽容地告诉我这是意外,并没有怪我。我坚持要补偿,所以第二天我去了一个古董店,找到了一个她可能会喜欢的类似花瓶。我还写了一封真诚的信,表达了我的懊悔和对她理解的感激。当我把新花瓶送给她时,她被我的心意感动,并告诉我我们的友谊远比任何物品都珍贵。这次经历让我明白了小心谨慎的重要性,也让我体会到真正友谊的价值,因为尽管发生了意外,我的朋友依然非常宽容和理解。
语法分析
答案使用了多种句子结构,包括复杂句和复合句,这有助于整体叙述的连贯性和流畅性。例如,“The accident occurred when I was helping to set the table for dinner”将多种动作合并到一个句子中。过去时态的使用一致且恰当,用于叙述过去的事件,如“I tripped over the edge of a rug”和“I went to an antique shop”。叙述中还包含条件句和情态动词,用以表达意图和假设情况,例如“I insisted on making amends”和“I thought she would like”。
高分词汇
  • accidental mishap
    意外事故
  • antique porcelain vase
    古董瓷花瓶
  • get-together
    聚会
  • regain my balance
    恢复我的平衡
  • inadvertently
    无意中
  • shattered into countless pieces
    粉碎成无数碎片
  • wave of guilt
    罪恶感的浪潮
  • gracious
    优雅的
  • make amends
    弥补错误
  • heartfelt note
    由衷的笔记
  • touched by the gesture
    被这一举动感动了
  • value of true friendship
    真正友谊的价值
  • forgiving and understanding
    宽容和理解