7 分范例

问题: Do you know many small businesses where you live?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Yes, there are many small businesses in my area, like cafes and bakeries. I like going to local markets where small vendors sell their products. It's nice to support them because they have unique things.
是的，我所在的地区有许多小型企业，比如咖啡馆和面包店。我喜欢去当地的市场，那里的小商贩出售他们的产品。支持他们很好，因为他们有独特的东西。
Yes, I live in a community with many small businesses, such as cafes, bakeries, and boutique shops. I often visit local markets where small vendors sell their products, and I enjoy supporting them because they offer unique products and personalized service.
是的，我住的社区有许多小型企业，比如咖啡馆、面包店和精品店。我经常去当地市场，那里的小商贩出售他们的产品，我喜欢支持他们，因为他们提供独特的产品和个性化的服务。
语法分析
1. 现在简单时态的使用：“I live”，“I often visit”，“I enjoy”等现在简单时态的使用，有效地描述了当前的情况和习惯性动作，适合该语境。 2. 关系从句的使用：句子“where small vendors sell their products”使用了关系从句，为当地市场提供了额外的信息，增强了回答的细节和丰富性。
高分词汇
  • cafes
    咖啡馆
  • bakeries
    面包店
  • boutique shops
    精品店
  • supporting them
    支持他们
  • unique products
    独特的产品
  • personalized service
    个性化服务

思路 2

No
不
考官答案
No, I don't know many small businesses because I live in a big city with lots of chain stores. I also shop online a lot, so I don't really explore local shops.
不，我不认识很多小企业，因为我住在一个拥有许多连锁店的大城市。我也经常在网上购物，所以我并不经常去逛当地的商店。
No, I don't know many small businesses in my area because I live in a big city where large chain stores dominate the market. I usually shop online, so I'm not familiar with local small businesses.
不，我不太了解我所在地区的许多小企业，因为我住在一个大型连锁店主导市场的大城市。我通常在网上购物，所以我不熟悉当地的小企业。
语法分析
1. 使用一般现在时：答案使用了一般现在时（“I don't know”，“I live”，“dominate”，“shop”，“am not familiar”）来描述普遍事实和习惯，这对于语境来说是合适的。 2. 因果结构：“because”的使用引出了不认识很多小企业的原因，显示了逻辑连接思想的能力。
高分词汇
  • large chain stores dominate the market
    大型连锁店主导市场
  • shop online
    网上购物
  • local small businesses
    本地小企业
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