7 分范例

问题: When was the last time you praised someone?

思路 1

Recently
最近
考官答案
I praised my friend this morning for their new haircut. It really suited them, and I thought it looked great, so I told them.
我今天早上夸奖了我的朋友他们的新发型。它真的很适合他们,我觉得看起来很棒,所以我告诉了他们。
Just this morning, I praised my friend for their new haircut. It really suited them, and I thought it looked fantastic, so I made sure to let them know how great they looked.
就在今天早上,我夸奖了我的朋友他们的新发型。它真的很适合他们,我觉得看起来很棒,所以我特意告诉他们看起来非常好。
语法分析
1. 一般过去时:“praised”、“suited”、“thought”、“looked”等一般过去时的使用有效地描述了发生在过去的已完成动作。 2. 使役结构:“made sure to let them know”这一短语展示了使役结构的用法,表示说话者有意确保他们的朋友知道这个赞美。
高分词汇
  • suited
    适合的
  • fantastic
    极好的
  • great
    great

思路 2

Not Very Recently
不久前
考官答案
I don't remember the last time I praised someone. I usually show appreciation by doing things for them instead of saying it.
我不记得上次表扬别人是什么时候了。我通常通过为他们做事来表达感激,而不是说出来。
I can't quite recall the last time I verbally praised someone. It's been a while, as I tend to show appreciation through actions rather than words. I believe actions speak louder than words, so I often express my gratitude by helping others out or doing something nice for them.
我不太记得上一次口头表扬别人是什么时候了。已经有一段时间了,因为我倾向于通过行动而不是言语来表达谢意。我相信行动胜于言辞,所以我经常通过帮助别人或为他们做点好事来表达我的感激。
语法分析
1. 情态动词的用法:“I can't quite recall” 使用了情态动词 “can't” 来表达不确定性,表明说话者无法回忆起某个具体事件。 2. 连词的用法:“as I tend to show appreciation through actions rather than words” 使用 “as” 引出原因,解释为什么口头表扬不常给出。
高分词汇
  • actions speak louder than words
    行动胜于言辞
  • helping others out
    帮助他人
  • express my gratitude
    表达我的感激之情