7 分范例
话题: Describe an argument two of your friends had
范例
A disagreement between friends When it happened I'm going to talk about an argument that happened between two of my close friends just a few months ago. It took place during a weekend getaway we had planned to a cabin in the mountains. We were all looking forward to a relaxing time, but unfortunately, things didn't go as smoothly as we had hoped. What it was about The argument was about something quite trivial, as is often the case with disagreements. It started over a board game we were playing one evening. One of my friends, let's call him Alex, accused the other friend, Sam, of cheating. Sam was really offended by this accusation because he takes games very seriously and prides himself on playing fairly. The situation escalated quickly, with both of them raising their voices and refusing to back down. It was quite uncomfortable for the rest of us who were there, as we didn't want to take sides. How it was solved The argument was eventually resolved the next morning. After a night of cooling off, Alex approached Sam and apologized for his accusation. He admitted that he might have overreacted and that it was just a game, after all. Sam, on his part, accepted the apology and admitted that he could have handled the situation better by not getting so defensive. They both agreed to let it go and move on, which was a relief for everyone involved. We decided to spend the rest of the weekend focusing on enjoying each other's company and making the most of our trip. And how you felt about it I felt a mix of emotions during and after the argument. Initially, I was quite anxious and uncomfortable because I didn't want to see my friends upset with each other. I was also worried that the argument might ruin the entire weekend for everyone. However, once they resolved their differences, I felt relieved and happy that they were able to put their friendship first. It was a reminder of how important communication and understanding are in maintaining strong relationships. It also made me appreciate the maturity both of my friends showed in resolving their conflict, which ultimately strengthened our bond as a group.
朋友之间的争执 发生的时间 我要讲的是几个月前我两个亲密朋友之间发生的一次争吵。那次争吵发生在我们计划去山区小木屋度假的一个周末。我们都期待着一个轻松的时光,但不幸的是,事情并不像我们希望的那样顺利。 争吵的原因 争吵的原因其实很琐碎,就像多数争执一样。那天晚上我们在玩一个桌游时,争吵开始了。我的一个朋友,我们叫他亚历克斯,指责另一个朋友萨姆作弊。萨姆对此非常反感,因为他对游戏很认真,并且以公平竞技为荣。情况迅速升级,两个人都提高了声音,谁也不愿意让步。对我们其他在场的人来说,这场面相当尴尬,因为我们都不想偏袒任何一方。 争吵是怎么解决的 争吵最终在第二天早上解决了。经过一夜冷静,亚历克斯主动找萨姆道歉,他承认自己可能反应过度,毕竟这只是个游戏。萨姆也接受了他的道歉,并承认自己本可以更好地处理情况,不必如此防御。他们都同意放下争执,继续前行,这让所有人都松了口气。我们决定在接下来的一整个周末里专注于享受彼此的陪伴,充分利用这次旅行。 你的感受 在争吵期间和之后,我心情复杂。起初,我感到很焦虑和不安,因为我不希望看到朋友们相互伤害。我也担心这次争吵会毁了大家的整个周末。然而,他们和解后,我感到宽慰和高兴,因为他们能够把友谊放在第一位。这让我想起沟通和理解在维持牢固关系中的重要性,也让我特别欣赏两位朋友在解决冲突时表现出的成熟,这最终加强了我们整个团队的纽带。
语法分析
答案展示了多种句型的有效使用,包括复合句和并列句,这些句型增强了叙述的流畅性。例如,“It took place during a weekend getaway we had planned to a cabin in the mountains.” 这句话将多个想法流畅地结合在一起。过去时态的使用一致且恰当,用于叙述过去的事件,如“The argument was eventually resolved the next morning.” 答案还有效地使用了间接引语来传达争论的解决,例如“Alex approached Sam and apologized for his accusation.”
高分词汇
  • weekend getaway
    周末短途旅行
  • trivial
    琐碎的
  • accused
    被告
  • offended
    冒犯
  • escalated
    升级了
  • cooling off
    冷却
  • overreacted
    反应过度
  • defensive
    防御性
  • relief
    救济
  • maturity
    成熟
  • communication and understanding
    沟通与理解
  • maintaining strong relationships
    保持良好的人际关系
  • strengthened our bond
    加强了我们的纽带