7 分范例
话题: Describe a time when you were very busy
范例
A hectic work week When it was I'm going to talk about a particularly hectic week I had at work about two months ago. It was during the end of the fiscal year, a time when everyone in my department was working around the clock to meet deadlines and finalize reports. What you did during the period During that week, I was responsible for compiling and analyzing a large set of financial data, preparing presentations for our stakeholders, and coordinating with different teams to ensure that all the necessary information was accurate and up-to-date. I also had to attend several meetings each day, which added to the workload. On top of that, I was mentoring a new team member, which required additional time and attention to ensure they were up to speed with our processes. What made you busy The primary reason for my busyness was the convergence of multiple deadlines. The end of the fiscal year is always a critical period for us, as we need to ensure that all financial statements are accurate and submitted on time. Additionally, there were unexpected last-minute changes requested by our senior management, which required us to revise our reports and presentations. This meant working late into the night and even over the weekend to ensure everything was completed to a high standard. And explain how you felt about the experience Reflecting on that week, I felt a mix of exhaustion and accomplishment. On one hand, the long hours and intense workload were physically and mentally draining. I remember feeling quite stressed and overwhelmed at times, especially when unexpected challenges arose. However, on the other hand, I felt a great sense of achievement once everything was completed. It was rewarding to see our hard work pay off and to receive positive feedback from our stakeholders. The experience taught me valuable lessons in time management and teamwork, and it reinforced my ability to handle pressure and meet tight deadlines. Despite the challenges, I felt proud of what we accomplished as a team.
繁忙的工作周 我想谈谈大约两个月前我在工作中经历的一段特别繁忙的周。这是财年结束的时候,我部门的每个人都在加班加点以赶上截止日期并完成报告。 在那段时间你做了什么 在那一周,我负责汇编和分析大量的财务数据,准备向我们的利益相关者展示的材料,并协调不同团队以确保所有必要的信息都是准确和最新的。我还每天参加几个会议,这增加了工作负担。除此之外,我还在指导一位新团队成员,这需要额外的时间和关注,以确保他们熟悉我们的流程。 是什么让你忙碌 我忙碌的主要原因是多个截止日期的集中到来。财年结束对我们来说总是一个关键时期,因为我们需要确保所有的财务报表准确并及时提交。此外,管理层还要求一些意外的临时变更,这要求我们修订报告和演示稿。这意味着我们需要加班到深夜,甚至在周末工作,以确保一切都达到高标准。 并解释你对这段经历的感受 回顾那一周,我感到疲惫和成就感交织在一起。一方面,长时间的工作和紧张的工作量在身体和精神上都很耗人。我记得有时感到相当压力山大和不知所措,特别是在出现意外挑战时。然而,另一方面,一切完成后我感到一种巨大的成就感。看到我们的辛勤工作得到了回报,并从利益相关者那里收到了积极的反馈,令人感到欣慰。这次经历让我学到了宝贵的时间管理和团队协作的经验,也强化了我应对压力和完成紧迫截止日期的能力。尽管面临挑战,我对我们作为一个团队所取得的成就感到自豪。
语法分析
答案有效地运用了多种句子结构,包括复杂句和复合句,从而增强了叙述的连贯性和深度。例如,这句话使用了复杂结构来提供详细的背景。在描述过去事件时,过去时的使用是一致且适当的,如“我负责汇编和分析一大批财务数据。”答案还使用了关系从句来添加细节,例如“这需要额外的时间和注意,以确保他们能够跟上我们的流程。”
高分词汇
  • hectic week
    繁忙的一周
  • fiscal year
    财年
  • meet deadlines
    按时完成任务
  • finalize reports
    最终确定报告
  • compiling and analyzing
    编译和分析
  • stakeholders
    利益相关者
  • coordinate
    协调
  • up-to-date
    最新的
  • convergence of multiple deadlines
    多个截止日期的汇聚
  • unexpected last-minute changes
    意外的临时变更
  • exhaustion and accomplishment
    疲惫与成就
  • mentally draining
    精神上消耗人。
  • time management
    时间管理
  • handle pressure
    处理压力
  • tight deadlines
    紧迫的截止日期