7 分范例
话题: Describe a difficult decision that you made and had a good result
范例
Choosing a career path What the decision was I'm going to talk about a difficult decision I made a few years ago regarding my career path. I had to choose between continuing my studies in engineering or switching to a completely different field, which was graphic design. When you made that decision I made this decision during my final year of university. It was a time when I was supposed to be focusing on my engineering thesis, but I found myself increasingly drawn to the world of design. I had been dabbling in graphic design as a hobby, and it was becoming more than just a pastime for me. Why it was difficult to make The decision was difficult for several reasons. First, I had already invested a significant amount of time and effort into my engineering studies, and switching fields felt like I was throwing all of that away. Additionally, there was the fear of the unknown; I had no formal training in graphic design, and I wasn't sure if I could make a successful career out of it. Moreover, my family had high expectations for me to become an engineer, and I was worried about disappointing them. Explain how you felt about the good result Ultimately, I decided to follow my passion and pursue graphic design. I enrolled in a design course and started building my portfolio. The transition was challenging, but it turned out to be one of the best decisions I've ever made. I now work as a graphic designer for a reputable company, and I love what I do. The good result of this decision was not just a fulfilling career but also personal happiness and satisfaction. I felt a sense of relief and joy knowing that I had the courage to follow my heart, and it paid off. This experience taught me the importance of listening to my instincts and being open to change, even when it's daunting.
选择职业道路 决策是什么 我将谈谈几年前我在职业道路上做出的一个艰难决定。我必须在继续攻读工程学位和转向一个完全不同的领域,即平面设计之间进行选择。 你什么时候做出这个决定 我在大学的最后一年做出了这个决定。那时我应该专注于我的工程论文,但我发现自己越来越被设计的世界吸引。我一直在业余时间 dabble 在平面设计,并且这对我来说已经不仅仅是一个消遣。 为什么这很难决定 这个决定很困难,原因有几个。首先,我已经在工程学习上投入了大量的时间和精力,而转行感觉像是在抛弃所有这些。此外,还有对未知的恐惧;我没有正式的平面设计培训,我不确定能否成功以此为职业。此外,我的家人对我成为一名工程师有很高的期望,我担心让他们失望。 解释你对好结果的感受 最终,我决定追随我的激情,去追求平面设计。我报名参加了一个设计课程,开始建立我的作品集。过渡很有挑战性,但这成为了我做过的最好的决定之一。我现在在一家知名公司担任平面设计师,我热爱我的工作。这个决定的好结果不仅是一个令人满意的职业,还有个人的幸福和满足感。知道我有勇气遵循我的内心,这带来了缓解和快乐,而这一切都得到了回报。这段经历教会我倾听直觉和开放接受变化的重要性,即使这令人畏惧。
语法分析
答案有效地使用了多种句子结构,包括复杂句和复合句,这为叙述增添了深度和清晰度。例如,这种句子组合提供了明确的时间线和背景。过去时的使用在描述过去的事件和决策时是一致且合适的,例如“我已经投入了大量时间和精力进行工程学习。”答案还使用了条件句来表达假设情况及其结果,如“我不确定我是否能从中成功发展职业。”
高分词汇
  • career path
    职业道路
  • engineering thesis
    工程论文
  • drawn to
    被吸引到
  • dabbling
    涉猎
  • pastime
    消遣
  • fear of the unknown
    对未知的恐惧
  • formal training
    正式培训
  • high expectations
    高期望
  • pursue
    追求
  • building my portfolio
    建立我的作品集
  • transition
    过渡
  • fulfilling career
    充实的职业
  • personal happiness
    个人幸福
  • sense of relief
    解脱感
  • courage to follow my heart
    勇气追随我的心
  • paid off
    付出得到了回报
  • listening to my instincts
    倾听我的直觉
  • open to change
    开放变化
  • daunting
    令人生畏