7 分范例

问题: What do you think are the cheapest and most expensive means of transport?

思路 1

Cheapest: Walking
最便宜：步行
考官答案
The cheapest way to get around is by walking. It doesn't cost anything, and you can go almost anywhere on foot.
最便宜的方式是走路。这不需要花钱，而且你可以几乎到达任何地方。
In my opinion, the most economical form of transportation is undoubtedly walking. It's completely free, accessible to nearly everyone, and it doesn't harm the environment. Plus, it's a great way to stay fit.
在我看来，最经济的交通方式无疑是步行。它完全免费，几乎所有人都可以做到，而且不会伤害环境。另外，它也是保持身体健康的好方法。
语法分析
1. 最高级和比较级形式的使用：短语“最经济的交通方式”有效地使用了最高级形式，突出了步行相对于其他交通方式的成本效益的极端性。 2. 并列连词的使用：使用“和”和“加”，有助于添加支持主要观点的多个理由，使论点更加有力，句子结构更加复杂。
高分词汇
  • - economical
    - 经济实惠
  • - accessible
    - 可访问
  • - doesn't harm the environment
    不会伤害环境
  • - a great way to stay fit
    一个保持健康的好方法

思路 2

Cheapest: Bicycling
骑自行车最便宜。
考官答案
Riding a bike is also a cheap way to travel. You just need a bike, and maintaining it isn't very expensive.
骑自行车也是一种廉价的出行方式。您只需要一辆自行车，而且维护成本也不是很高。
Bicycling stands out as another cost-effective means of transport. Bikes are relatively inexpensive to purchase and maintain, and many cities offer affordable bike-sharing systems, making it faster than walking and still very budget-friendly.
骑自行车是另一种经济实惠的交通方式。自行车购买和维护相对廉价，许多城市提供经济实惠的共享单车系统，比步行更快，仍然非常经济实惠。
语法分析
1. 比较形式：使用“相对便宜”和“仍然非常经济实惠”有效地运用比较形式来强调骑自行车相对于其他交通方式的经济性。 2. 现在简单时态：答案中一贯使用现在简单时态（“显眼”，“是”，“提供”），适合陈述一般事实和正在发生的情况。
高分词汇
  • cost-effective
    高性价比
  • relatively inexpensive
    相对便宜
  • affordable bike-sharing systems
    经济实惠的共享单车系统
  • budget-friendly
    经济实惠

思路 3

Most Expensive: Private Jets
最昂贵的：私人飞机
考官答案
The most expensive transport might be private jets. They cost a lot because you need to pay for the jet, the crew, and the fuel.
最昂贵的交通方式可能是私人飞机。它们很贵，因为你需要支付飞机、机组和燃料的费用。
Private jets are arguably the most expensive means of transport. The costs involved are astronomical, covering not only the purchase and maintenance but also the crew and fuel. It's a luxury that only the wealthy can afford, offering both convenience and privacy.
私人飞机可以说是最昂贵的交通工具。涉及的成本是天文数字，不仅包括购买和维护，还有机组人员和燃料。这是只有富人才能负担得起的奢侈享受，提供了便利和隐私。
语法分析
1. 使用情态动词"are arguably"：这个短语以一种温和的方式引入了一个观点，对学术或正式讨论非常有效。 2. 复杂的句子结构：句子"The costs involved are astronomical, covering not only the purchase and maintenance but also the crew and fuel"使用了多个从句的复杂结构，展示了更高水平的英语能力。
高分词汇
  • - **arguably**: suggests a statement is open to debate but the speaker believes it to be true.
    - **有人认为**: 表示该论述是有争议的，但说话者相信它是真实的。
  • - **astronomical**: extremely high or large; often used to describe costs.
    - **astronomical**：极高或极大；经常用来描述费用。
  • - **convenience and privacy**: these words are key benefits often associated with luxury services, enhancing the descriptive quality of the answer.
    - **便捷和隐私**：这些词汇通常与奢侈服务联系在一起，增强了答案的描述性质。

思路 4

Most Expensive: Yachts
最昂贵的：游艇
考官答案
Yachts are really expensive too. They cost a lot to buy and you have to pay for lots of other things like the crew and where to keep the yacht.
游艇也非常昂贵。购买成本很高，你还必须为船员和游艇停放位置等其他事项支付费用。
Yachts are another form of transport that incurs exorbitant costs. Not only are they expensive to purchase, but the ongoing expenses such as crew wages, maintenance, docking fees, and fuel make it a luxury reserved for the affluent, often symbolizing a high social status.
游艇是另一种会产生高昂费用的交通方式。不仅购买成本昂贵，而且还需支付持续的开支，如船员工资、维护费、停泊费和燃料费，使其成为富裕阶层的奢侈品，往往象征着高社会地位。
语法分析
1. 使用比较结构：短语“不仅购买昂贵，而且…”有效地使用比较结构强调了与游艇相关的多层成本。 2. 使用被动语态：“被产生”，“是昂贵的”，以及“使其成为一种奢侈” - 这些被动结构适当地用于关注动作和对象，而不是执行动作的人，这在正式和描述性写作中很常见。
高分词汇
  • - **exorbitant costs**: Indicates extremely high costs.
    - **高昂的费用**：指的是极高的费用。
  • - **crew wages, maintenance, docking fees, and fuel**: Specific terms related to the upkeep of yachts, showing detailed knowledge about the subject.
    - **机组工资、维护、停靠费和燃料**:与游艇维护相关的具体术语，表明对主题有详细的了解。
  • - **luxury reserved for the affluent**: Indicates that this is something only wealthy people can afford, enhancing the description of exclusivity.
    - 富人才能享受的奢华：表明这是只有富人才能负担得起的东西，增强了独家性的描述。
  • - **high social status**: Connects the cost to social implications, adding depth to the answer.
    - **高社会地位**: 将成本与社会影响联系起来，为答案增添了深度。
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