7 分范例

问题: Do you think we should allow children to make noise in public places?

思路 1

Yes, Within Reason
是的,适度地
考官答案
Yes, public places should be open to everyone, including kids who are full of energy. Children express themselves loudly as they grow. It's not realistic to expect them to always be quiet. Accepting their energy in public is not just about being tolerant, but about liking the liveliness they add to life.
是的,公共场所应该对所有人开放,包括那些充满活力的孩子们。孩子们在成长过程中会大声表达自己。期望他们始终保持安静是不现实的。在公共场合接受他们的活力不仅仅是关于容忍,而是关于欣赏他们为我们的日常生活带来的活力。
Absolutely, public spaces ought to be welcoming to all, and that includes the younger ones with their energetic spirits. Children naturally express themselves, often audibly, as a part of their development. It's unrealistic to expect them to be constantly silent. Embracing their liveliness in public areas is not just about tolerance, but about appreciating the vibrancy they bring to our everyday lives.
当然,公共空间应该欢迎所有人,其中包括精力充沛的年轻人。作为他们发展的一部分,孩子们通常会自然地表达自己的声音。期望他们一直保持沉默是不现实的。在公共场所接受他们的活泼不仅仅是宽容,更是欣赏他们给我们的日常生活带来的活力。
语法分析
被动语态:"ought to be welcoming" 使用被动语态,表明这是一种对公共场所的期望,强调公共场所的特性而不是行为的执行者。 现在分词作宾补:"express themselves" 使用现在分词作宾补,描绘孩子们表达自己的方式,增加了句子的复杂性。 现在进行时:"are not just about tolerance" 使用现在进行时表达一个持续的状态或观点,即接受孩子们的活力不仅仅是容忍。
高分词汇
  • energetic spirits
    精力充沛
  • express themselves
    表达自己
  • unrealistic
    不现实的
  • embracing
    拥抱
  • vibrancy
    活力

思路 2

No, With Exceptions
不是的,但有例外
考官答案
In public places, respecting others is important, and this means keeping quiet to some extent. It's important to teach kids to be careful about how loud they are in public. This is not only for peace and quiet, but also to teach them respect and thoughtfulness. It's a simple but useful lesson about how their actions affect others, which helps them grow into respectful people in society.
在公共场所,尊重他人很重要,这意味着要保持一定程度的安静。教导孩子们在公共场合注意自己的音量是重要的。这不仅仅是为了保持和平,也是为了灌输尊重和体贴的价值观。这是一个简单但有价值的课程,让他们了解自己的行为如何影响他人,有助于他们成长为社会中有礼貌的人。
In public areas, it's crucial to respect others, and that includes maintaining a certain level of quiet. Teaching children to be mindful of their volume in public settings is important. It's not just about keeping the peace; it's about instilling values of respect and consideration. It's a simple yet valuable lesson in understanding how their actions impact others and helps in nurturing them into respectful individuals in society.
在公共区域里,尊重他人至关重要,这包括保持一定程度的安静。教育孩子在公共场合注意他们的音量是重要的。这不仅仅是为了维持安静;而是关于向孩子们灌输尊重和体贴的价值观。这是一节简单但有价值的课程,让他们理解自己的行为如何影响他人,并有助于培养他们成为社会上尊重他人的个体。
语法分析
动名词作主语:"Teaching children to be mindful" 使用动名词短语作主语,说明教导孩子们注意音量是一个重要的行动或概念。 现在分词作定语:"respectful individuals" 使用现在分词"respectful"作定语,描述孩子们成长为怎样的个体,增加了句子的详细性和准确性。 现在分词作宾补:"helps in nurturing them" 使用现在分词作宾补,描述培养孩子们成为尊重他人的个体的过程。
高分词汇
  • crucial
    关键的
  • mindful
    注意的
  • volume
    音量
  • instilling
    灌输
  • consideration
    体贴
  • nurturing
    培养