7 分范例

问题: What should people do to achieve their goals?

思路 1

Goal Setting and Action Planning
目标设定与行动计划
考官答案
I really believe in being organized and planning the steps to reach a goal. A detailed action plan can make it clear what we need to do to achieve our goals. With so many distractions nowadays, if we don't plan and stay focused on our goals, we might lose focus and our ambitions might get lost in the distractions.
我非常相信做好组织和规划是实现目标所需的步骤。一个详细的行动计划可以清楚地指出我们需要做什么来实现我们的目标。现在有这么多的分心事,如果我们不做计划并保持专注于我们的目标,我们可能会失去焦点,我们的抱负可能会在这些干扰中迷失。
I'm a great believer in getting organized and planning the steps that are needed to reach a goal. A step-by-step action plan can really clarify what we need to do to get to where we want to be. There are so many distractions today that if we don't do this and keep our eyes on the prize then I feel we lose focus and whatever it was we wanted to achieve gets lost in all the noise.
我坚信组织和计划实现目标所需的步骤。 分步行动计划可以真正阐明我们需要做什么才能达到我们想要的目标。 今天有太多的干扰,如果我们不这样做并把注意力集中在奖品上,那么我觉得我们会失去焦点,无论我们想要实现什么,都会迷失在所有的噪音中。
语法分析
动名词: "in getting organized and planning" 使用动名词形式来描述行为,增加了句子的流畅性和复杂性。 条件句: "if we don’t do this and keep our eyes on the prize" 使用条件句来表达不保持专注可能导致的负面后果,增加了句子的逻辑性和复杂度。 宾语从句: "clarify what we need to do" 使用宾语从句来详细描述行动计划的具体内容,提高了语言的准确性和信息量。
高分词汇
  • a great believer
    坚信
  • step-by-step
    逐步的
  • clarify
    阐明
  • distraction
    分心事
  • keep our eyes on the prize
    把注意力集中在奖品上
  • lost in all the noise
    迷失在所有噪音里

思路 2

Self-Management and Sustained Motivation
自我管理与持续动力
考官答案
To reach their goals, people need to really focus on self-control and persistence. Self-control means sticking to your path, even when it's hard or you don't feel like it. Persistence means continuing to move forward, no matter how tough it gets. Try your best every day, and don't give up when you face difficulties. Working steadily towards your goals is important for achieving them.
为了达到他们的目标,人们需要真正专注于自制力和坚持。自制力意味着即使在困难或不愿意的时候也要坚持自己的道路。坚持则意味着无论遇到多大困难都要继续前进。每天尽力而为,在面对困难时不要放弃。稳步朝着目标前进对于实现它们很重要。
To achieve their goals, people really need to focus on self-discipline and perseverance. Self-discipline is all about staying on your path, even when it's tough or you're not in the mood. Perseverance is about keeping on going, no matter how hard things get. Just do your best every day, and don't quit when facing challenges. Steadily working towards your goals is the key to achieving them.
为了实现目标,人们真的需要专注于自律和毅力。自律就是即使在困难或不想做的时候也要保持自己的道路。毅力则是无论遇到多大困难都要继续前进。每天尽力而为,面对挑战时不要放弃。稳步朝着目标前进是实现它们的关键。
语法分析
动名词: "in getting organized and planning" 使用动名词形式来描述行为,增加了句子的流畅性和复杂性。 条件句: "if we don’t do this and keep our eyes on the prize" 使用条件句来表达不保持专注可能导致的负面后果,增加了句子的逻辑性和复杂度。 宾语从句: "clarify what we need to do" 使用宾语从句来详细描述行动计划的具体内容,提高了语言的准确性和信息量。
高分词汇
  • self-discipline
    自律
  • perseverance
    毅力
  • tough
    困难的
  • mood
    心情
  • challenges
    挑战
  • steadily
    稳步地
  • working towards
    朝着...努力