7 分范例

问题: Who should teach teenagers skills?

思路 1

Parents and Family
家长和家庭
考官答案
In my opinion, it comes from the family. Children often imitate their parents, whether they want to or not. Parents should set a good example and be good role models. You can usually tell when young people have been taught well by their family because they seem more capable and grounded.
在我看来,这必须来自家庭。孩子们往往会模仿他们的父母,无论他们是否愿意。父母应该树立一个好榜样,成为坚实的角色模型。当年轻人受到家庭的良好教育时,通常可以看出来,因为他们看起来更有能力,更稳重。
​It has to come from the family in my view. Children tend to be a carbon copy of their parents to a degree, whether they like it or not, and it’s down to the parents to set a good example and be a solid role model. It’s often very easy to spot the young people whose family have taught them a lot as they are just more capable and grounded.
在我看来,它必须来自家庭。 无论孩子是否愿意,在某种程度上,孩子往往会成为父母的翻版,父母必须树立良好的榜样,成为坚实的榜样。 通常很容易发现那些家庭教会了他们很多东西的年轻人,因为他们更有能力、更脚踏实地。
语法分析
条件句: "whether they like it or not" 这个条件句强调了孩子们模仿父母的普遍性,无论他们的个人意愿如何,增加了句子的深度和普遍性。 被动语态: "to be a solid role model" 使用被动语态强调父母作为榜样的责任,而不是具体的行动或方式,增加了句子的客观性和深度。 现在分词作形容词: "capable and grounded" 使用现在分词作为形容词描述年轻人的特质,增强了句子的描述力和准确性。
高分词汇
  • a carbon copy
    翻版
  • to a degree
    在某种程度上
  • a solid role model
    坚实的榜样
  • capable
    有能力的
  • grounded
    稳重的

思路 2

Educators and Schools
教育者和学校
考官答案
These days, many parents are too busy to teach their children skills, so schools and teachers play a crucial role. Additionally, there are 21st-century skills like digital literacy that are best taught by qualified teachers. Learning from professionals is more efficient, and it can lead to fewer conflicts at home.
如今,许多父母都太忙,无法教授他们的孩子技能,因此学校和老师起着至关重要的作用。此外,还有像数字素养这样的21世纪技能,最好由合格的老师教授。从专业人士那里学习更有效率,也可以减少家庭冲突。
I think that nowadays, a lot of parents are too busy to actively teach their children skills and so it is left to the school and teachers. There are also a lot of 21st century skills like digital literacy that only teachers are qualified to teach, and so it’s just more efficient to learn from professionals, and this definitely leads to fewer conflicts in the home too
我想现在很多家长都太忙了,没有时间去积极地教孩子技能,所以就剩下学校和老师了。 还有很多21世纪的技能,比如数字素养,只有老师才有资格教授,所以向专业人士学习会更有效,这肯定也会减少家庭冲突
语法分析
副词修饰动词: "too busy to actively teach" 使用副词修饰动词 "teach",强调父母没有足够的时间积极地教授孩子,增加了句子的描述力和细节。 并列句: "so schools and teachers play a crucial role" 使用并列句结构,表明学校和老师都在教育中扮演关键角色,增加了句子的信息量和逻辑性。 定语从句: "that are best taught by qualified teachers" 使用定语从句修饰 "21st-century skills",详细说明哪些技能最适合由合格老师教授,增强了句子的复杂性和信息量。
高分词汇
  • actively
    积极地
  • is left to
    剩下
  • digital literacy
    数字素养
  • qualified
    有资格的
  • efficient
    有效率的
  • fewer conflicts
    减少冲突