7 分范例

问题: What important skills should a child learn?

思路 1

Social and Emotional Skills
社交和情感技能
考官答案
I think empathy and understanding are often forgotten. These skills are important for children to fit in. Understanding how someone else feels, even about things we think are small, is an important emotional skill. It helps children make friends and get along well with others.
我认为同理心和理解力经常被忽视。这些技能对于孩子们融入集体是非常重要的。理解别人对我们可能认为微不足道的事情的感受是一种重要的情感技能。它帮助孩子们交朋友并与他人相处融洽。
Something that I think is often overlooked is empat​hy and understanding. These are skills that unless learned, will make it very difficult for children to fit in. Being able to understand how someone else feels about something that we may believe to be trivial is an emotional skill that will put every child in good stead and help them make friends.
我认为经常被忽视的是同理心和理解。 这些技能除非学习,否则会让孩子们很难融入。能够理解别人对我们可能认为微不足道的事情的感受是一种情感技能,这将使每个孩子都受益并帮助他们 交朋友。
语法分析
被动语态: "are often overlooked" 这个表达使用了被动语态,强调了这些技能被忽视的情况,而不是忽视它们的人,增加了句子的深度和客观性。 条件句: "unless learned, will make it very difficult" 这个条件句强调了如果这些技能没有被学会,孩子们融入社会的困难,增加了逻辑性和情景描述。
高分词汇
  • overlook
    忽视
  • empathy
    同理心
  • put every child in good stead
    使每个孩子都受益
  • emotional skill
    情感技能
  • fit in
    融入

思路 2

Practical Life Skills
实用生活技能
考官答案
I think it's important for children to learn about money. Parents and teachers often don't teach this, which is odd because it's a big part of life. Understanding the true cost of things and how to save money are skills that will be very useful when children start living on their own.
我认为教育孩子了解金钱是很重要的。父母和老师通常不教这些,这很奇怪,因为这是生活中的重要部分。了解事物的真正成本以及如何节省金钱是一些技能,当孩子们离开家并开始独立生活时,这些技能将非常有价值。
Personally, I believe that children should be taught about money. It’s something that parents and teachers don’t do, which is strange considering that it’s an important part of life. Learning the real cost of something and how to save are life skills that will be invaluable when they leave home and start to live independently.
就我个人而言,我认为应该教导孩子有关金钱的知识。 这是父母和老师不做的事情,考虑到这是生活的重要组成部分,这很奇怪。 了解某物的实际成本以及如何储蓄是生活技能,当他们离开家并开始独立生活时,这些技能将非常宝贵。
语法分析
被动语态: "should be taught about money" 这个表达使用了被动语态,强调金钱知识的教育是应该被实施的,而不是具体实施者,增加了句子的客观性和深度。 条件句: "when they leave home and start to live independently" 这个条件句描述了孩子们独立生活的时机,说明了学习金钱管理技能的重要性,增加了逻辑性和情景描述。 现在分词作状语: "Learning the real cost of something" 使用现在分词作为状语,描述了金钱教育的具体内容,使句子更具体和生动。
高分词汇
  • strange
    奇怪的
  • considering
    考虑到
  • the real cost of something
    某物的实际成本
  • invaluable
    无价的
  • independently
    独立地