7 分范例

问题: What extra facilities are there at tourist attractions in your country?

思路 1

Accommodation and Dining
住宿和餐饮
考官答案
Nowadays, many tourist attractions have hotels nearby, so tourists can stay overnight. Theme parks, especially, often have themed hotels designed for families. These hotels can be expensive, but they allow people from all over the country to enjoy the attractions without the hassle of traveling back home the same day.
如今,许多旅游景点附近都有酒店,便于游客过夜。特别是主题公园,通常有专为家庭设计的主题酒店。这些酒店可能价格不菲,但它们让来自全国各地的人们能够享受景点所提供的体验,无需在同一天赶回家,省去了很多麻烦。
A lot of tourist attractions these days have hotels connected to them so tourists can stay over. Places like theme parks in particular have themed hotels that are specifically aimed at families. They cost quite a bit but it means that people from all over the country can come and experience what there is to offer there without the added hassle of having to go all the way home.
如今,许多旅游景点都设有与其相连的酒店,以便游客可以过夜。 特别是像主题公园这样的地方,有专门针对家庭的主题酒店。 它们的费用相当高,但这意味着来自全国各地的人们可以来这里体验那里所提供的一切,而无需一路回家带来额外的麻烦。
语法分析
现在分词作定语:"having hotels connected to them" 使用现在分词作定语,描述了酒店与旅游景点的紧密连接,增强了句子的信息量和描述性。 目的状语从句:"so tourists can stay over" 使用目的状语从句来解释酒店存在的目的,即方便游客过夜。 条件状语从句:"without the added hassle of having to go all the way home" 使用条件状语从句来描述住宿的好处,即减少返程的麻烦,突出了旅游住宿的便利性。
高分词汇
  • connected
    相连
  • stay over
    过夜
  • themed hotels
    主题酒店
  • specially aimed at
    专门针对
  • quite a bit
    昂贵
  • offer
    提供
  • hassle
    麻烦

思路 2

Entertainment and Leisure
娱乐和休闲
考官答案
In my country, every tourist attraction has a souvenir shop. They are found everywhere and offer a wide variety of local products. It's an excellent opportunity for locals to showcase their crafts and produce. These shops also give them a source of income they might not have otherwise.
在我的国家,每个旅游景点都有一个纪念品商店。这些商店随处可见,出售各种各样的当地商品。这是当地人展示他们的手工艺品和产品的绝佳机会。这些商店还为他们提供了他们可能没有的收入来源。
We can’t go to any tourist attraction in my country without seeing a souvenir shop. They are everywhere and sell a huge range of local goods. It’s a great way for the local people to be able to show off local crafts and produce and it provides the locals with a source of income that they wouldn’t necessarily have otherwise.
我们去我国的任何一个旅游景点都不能不去纪念品商店。 他们无处不在,出售种类繁多的当地商品。 这是当地人展示当地工艺品和农产品的好方法,它为当地人提供了他们原本不一定有的收入来源。
语法分析
现在分词作定语:"selling a huge range of local goods" 使用现在分词作定语,描述纪念品商店的特点和提供的商品种类,增加了句子的详细信息。 被动语态:"be able to show off" 使用被动语态来强调当地人展示手工艺品和产品的机会,表明这是由纪念品商店提供的机会。
高分词汇
  • souvenir
    纪念品
  • huge
    大量的
  • show off  local crafts
    展示当地手工艺品
  • produce
    产品
  • provide
    提供
  • a source of income
    收入来源
  • otherwise
    否则