7 分范例

问题: Are tourist attractions in the countryside more popular than those in the cities?

思路 1

Yes, Countryside Attractions Are More Welcome
是的,乡村景点更受欢迎
考官答案
Yes, I agree. Countryside attractions are more peaceful because the number of visitors is controlled, so they don't become too crowded. They are also connected to the natural environment, making them more beautiful. In contrast, city tourist spots are often very crowded and can be stressful to visit.
是的,我同意。乡村景点更加宁静,因为游客数量受到控制,所以不会太拥挤。它们还与周围的自然环境相连,更加美观。相比之下,城市的旅游景点通常非常拥挤,访问起来可能会很有压力。
Yes, I think so. They are just more peaceful and as visitor numbers are controlled so these kinds of places don’t get overcrowded. They are also linked to the natural environment around them so they are much more aesthetically pleasing. As cities have so many people in them, every tourist attraction is absolutely packed, and are stressful places to visit.
是的,我想是这样。 它们只是更加安静,而且由于游客数量受到控制,因此这些地方不会过度拥挤。 它们还与周围的自然环境联系在一起,因此更加美观。 由于城市人口众多,每个旅游景点都挤满了人,参观起来压力很大
语法分析
被动语态:"visitor numbers are controlled" 使用被动语态表明游客数量的控制是由外部因素引起的,增加了句子的准确性和逻辑性。 比较级:"more peaceful" 和 "much more aesthetically pleasing" 使用比较级来强调乡村景点与城市景点在宁静和美观方面的差异,清晰地表达了两者之间的对比。
高分词汇
  • controlled
    受控制的
  • overcrowded
    过度拥挤
  • natural environment
    自然环境
  • aesthetically pleasing
    美观的
  • packed
    拥挤的
  • stressful
    有压力的

思路 2

No, City Attractions Are Equally or More Popular
不,城市景点同样或更受欢迎
考官答案
No, I don't think so. City attractions are more conveniently accessible as we don't need a car to reach them, making them more popular. The infrastructure in the countryside often makes it hard to get to places without a car, and it can take a long time to reach them. This is why attractions in the city are usually busier.
不,我不这么认为。城市景点更容易到达,因为我们不需要开车就能到,这使得它们更受欢迎。乡村的基础设施通常使得没有车很难到达这些地方,而且到达那里可能需要很长时间。这就是为什么城市景点通常更繁忙的原因。不,我不这么认为。城市景点更容易到达,因为我们不需要开车就能到,这使得它们更受欢迎。乡村的基础设施通常使得没有车很难到达这些地方,而且到达那里可能需要很长时间。这就是为什么城市景点通常更繁忙的原因。
No, I don’t think that’s the case really. Attractions in the city have much more convenient access in that we don’t need a car to get to them, and this makes them more popular. The infrastructure in the countryside doesn’t always allow us to get to these places very easily and so, unless we drive, it takes an age to get there. This is why city attractions are often busier.
不,我认为事实并非如此。 城市里的景点交通更加方便,我们不需要开车就能到达,这使得它们更受欢迎。 农村的基础设施并不总是能让我们很容易地到达这些地方,因此,除非我们开车,否则需要很长时间才能到达那里。 这就是为什么城市景点往往更加繁忙的原因。
语法分析
比较级:"more convenient" 和 "busier" 使用比较级来强调城市景点相对于乡村景点在方便性和繁忙程度上的差异。 现在分词作原因状语:"in that we don’t need a car to get to them" 使用现在分词作原因状语,解释了城市景点受欢迎的原因,即交通方便。 条件状语从句:"unless we drive" 使用条件状语从句指出乡村景点访问的限制,即如果不开车就难以到达,强调了乡村景点的不便之处。
高分词汇
  • convenient access
    交通便利
  • infrastructure
    基础设施
  • allow
    允许
  • unless
    除非
  • an age
    更长时间