7 分范例

问题: Why do most people prefer to use a paper map?

思路 1

Ease of Use
简单易用
考官答案
Maybe it's because they are easier to use. Older people might not use digital maps much because they're not used to the technology. They know paper maps better. Also, finding your way from one place to another with a paper map feels like an achievement, since you need to think more about the journey.
可能是因为它们更容易使用。老年人可能不太使用数字地图,因为他们不习惯这项技术。他们对纸质地图更熟悉。此外,使用纸质地图从一个地方找到另一个地方感觉像是一种成就,因为你需要更多地思考旅程情况。
It's probably because they don't require any technical knowledge. I think older people tend to shy away from using digital maps because they aren't very confident with using the tech, so a paper map is something they are more familiar with. There's also a sense of achievement when using one to navigate from one place to another as some thought needs to go into planning a journey.
这可能是因为它们不需要任何技术知识。 我认为老年人往往对使用电子地图望而却步,因为他们对使用技术不是很有信心,所以纸质地图是他们更熟悉的东西。 使用纸质地图从一个地方导航到另一个地方,也会有一种成就感,因为在规划旅程时需要花费一些心思。
语法分析
动词短语:"tend to shy away from" - 使用动词短语来描述老年人对新技术的态度,表达了一种倾向性,增加了句子的复杂度。 被动语态:"aren’t very confident" - 使用被动语态来描述老年人对使用技术的信心不足,强调了情感状态而非动作本身。 不定式作目的状语:"to navigate from one place to another" - 使用不定式作目的状语,说明使用纸质地图进行导航的目的,强调规划旅程的重要性。
高分词汇
  • technical knowledge
    技术知识
  • shy away
    回避
  • tech
    技术
  • familiar
    熟悉
  • sense of achievement
    成就感
  • navigate
    浏览
  • some thought needs to go into
    需要考虑一下

思路 2

Reliability
可靠性
考官答案
I think it's about being reliable. Paper maps are always there for you. They don't need a network or battery, so they're more dependable. It's a hassle when our phone dies while trying to find a new place, leaving us lost. But a paper map doesn't have that problem.
我认为这取决于可靠性。纸质地图总是可靠的。它们不需要网络或电池,所以更可信赖。当我们尝试找到一个新地方而手机没电了,让我们迷路时,这真的很不方便。但纸质地图就没有这个问题。
It comes down to reliability in my view. Paper maps will never let you down. They don't need network coverage or a battery to work so we can depend on them more. It's really inconvenient when we are trying to get somewhere for the first time and our mobile runs out of battery, leaving us stranded. A paper map just doesn't have this issue.
在我看来,这归结于可靠性。 纸质地图永远不会让你失望。 它们不需要网络覆盖或电池就能工作,因此我们可以更加依赖它们。 当我们第一次想去某个地方时,手机却没电了,导致我们被困,这确实很不方便。 纸质地图就没有这个问题。
语法分析
动名词作主语:"reliability" - 使用动名词作为主语,强调可靠性作为选择纸质地图的主要原因。 现在分词作原因状语:"leaving us stranded" - 使用现在分词短语作原因状语,描述了手机没电导致的困境,增加了句子的情感色彩和复杂性。
高分词汇
  • reliability
    可靠性
  • let you down
    让你失望
  • network coverage
    网络覆盖
  • depend on
    依赖
  • inconvenient
    不方便的
  • runs out of
    用完
  • stranded
    受困